This was a really good story so far. I would like to see it updated.

Damn, this is one hell of a fic. I understand if you've forgotten about this story, or have moved on, but I just want you to know that your writing is amazing. Either that, or I'm just a sucker of well-written angst. The funky symbols are barely enough to deter me. I'm in love with this thing, man, and if you ever update it, I'd be thrown into a fit of amazement.

*sniff sniff * poor poor raven keep it up ;0 ;p ;)

SAD! *sniff* keep it up! ;p ;o ;)

get more up fast plz ;p

Great! Update soon please!

If you can, please read my story "The Native"? It's heavy on the blood and somewhat over rated at the moment, but it's the better of the 2 zoid fic.s I have...at the current point in time.

oh my god you evil person you killed shadow! how dare you kill shadow HOW DARE YOU! * looks aroud while holding a giant mallot with an evil glint in eyes* hello? where are you Firemoon? i wont hurt you (much)

You killed Shadow! *glares*

But, even with no Shadow, it's a great fic. And I don't even know who the characters are...;

Except Shadow. And...somewhat...a few other zoid types.

Anyway. it's very good. WRITE MORE!

Y are u picking on Raven DUDE!

He's the best! Oh Yay Poor Shadow!

But anyway Its Really Good! WHERE IS THE REST! I rather this be happening to Van. That Would be funny! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

DUDE

Hey well What's the Death sentence going to be.

You know You have a point their Raven is too Proud to commit suicide.

I think Van will be the killer Like in my fic.

It's interesting to compare our stories and how different they are.

Ah... aahh-ah..?

Moon-Chan...! I...

I MISSED YOU! *Tackles Firemoon to the ground at light-speed* Weh, weh, where did you go? *WHACK!* I missed you! *Whack! Bam! BOOM!* You came BACK! *Smothers Firemoon in a bear-hug*

Haha, lol, guess I got a lil' excited there. Now I understand how Kagura feels whenever she sees Kyo *Rolls eyes*. Anyway, I am so unendingly glad you're back. *Happy Dance* Ah, did you say your absence was due to an illness? That's the same reason I didn't update in forever! I got sick for three whole months! So, so, so if you need to talk, jus' drop me a line. ;) The_City_of_Angels

Luv ya! Continue soon! (Especially now that you've gotten my hopes up) *Dances away and finally leaves poor Firemoon in peace*

-...AH! if youre' wondering wy im' screaming, its' because i BOTH love and hate this/your story

-i absolutely love angst fics and am going to be writing some myself, but i HATE that you killed Shadow (throws rotten tomato at you), but i love your angst fic about Raven( tosses you a chocolate covered downut)

-...BUT WY DID SHADOW HAVE TO GO! (throws more rotten items)

-*sniffles real big* but anyvays i want you to UPDATE AGAIN SOON!

-...on favorits list

-KEEP TYPING!(throws more chocolate and sugar coated items at you0

*hugs* Feel better, 'kay? I'm just glad that you're still writing here. You add life to this place, yanno? If you ever wanna talk, I'm here. -_-

you must made a lot of guts to make that fic. did'nt it made you like...cry? Well i did and it has been in my dreams. but its a great one.

keep up the good work._

Hey.I like is really is really good.

Kitty