I hope you eventually come back to this fic but since it’s been over a decade I’m highly doubtful of it.

Great chapter story so far please continue this story soon.

Interesting...

its been 8 YEARS since you last update! please upload a new chapter in the next 8 years, earlier would be really nice.

i love this thoe i was hoping for a real sex seen. i hope u start righting this again.

I think that you need to take more thought into your worldbuilding. the two worlds in this crossover aren't quite matching up yet.

Well thus far i can't really say if the story is good or bad but a few of the things you changed were definatly in the stupid catagory while others were interesting. Animagus ambitions, the attack on hermione, saving hermione and planning for continuing the DA were cool but harry being a prefect and potions wiz? Really?

That aside, how exactly does this relate to slayers? Guess I'll have to readon on to see, maybe?

ho boy i forgot how good this fic was. You better update really soon I'm having withdrawal from this fic. lol. Please. I am so interestd in finding out what is going to happem

Ja

Sakura

Eternity

Oh very interesting. I LOVE Slayers! It's one of my favourite Animes along with Gundam Wing, Naruto, Yu Yu Hakusho, InuYasha, and FAKE! to name a few. It is awesome and is hillarious especially the episode where Hellmaster Phibrizzo is defeated and Lina comes back with Gourry after being taken over by the lord of nightmares and Xell says "It seems that the Lord of Nightmares has a rather capricious nature" and Gourry and Lina are kissing before she bitts him off the stone claiming he took advantage of her. ROTFLMFAO! That's one of my fave parts. I really hope you update this foc soon.

Ja matte ne

Sakura Maxwell-Minamino

Sakura Chang-Maxwell-Yuy

Eternity

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How many ways can you say Deus Ex Machina? Hmm. Bad Plot Device. Convenient Coincidence.

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You over powered harry with a stupidly ridiculous idea, but then you just decided to bipity bopity boop Voldemort to advanced chaos demon class?

Pff. Voldie is a human! And if Voldie just did this, that means Voldie could have done it at any time.

Which he WOULD HAVE! The guy didn't bulk at splitting his soul into pieces, why should he bulk at a sudden UBER BOOST in power? Pff. Horrible plot device. Simply HORRIBLE...

Blegh.. leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

Random Coincidences... bleck.

Ja!

MB

You're evil?

Heh. Because you used a curse that turns voldie into a ball of regenerating mush? Kid... you don't -touch- evil.

No offense intended of course. Evil has to be described. Evil has to make you feel a chill in your bones (At the very least. At the worst it should bring tears.)

This made me 'laugh'.

Not that i'm a master of course, but I felt no evil whatsoever from this.

Other than that the fic is pretty good. Worth the read if only because it seems to be the ONLY fic where Harry learns Dragon Slave... Weak reasoning for Harry becoming godly overnight, and kinda cheap at that. "Oh lookie here! I'm Lina and I just so happen to think YOU are the one who my powers should go to! YIPPITEE DAY!" ... Bleegh... and you are a pretty big fan of those other languages for your spells ain't'cha? Well it appears that english may or may not be your first language so I forgive you. _

I'll finish it up, but only cuz i'm bored. Hope you gotten much better since this was last updated in 04. _

Ja!

MB

hey this is one of the best stories that i have come across in 2 years. i see you havent updated this story in a while and so i have come to beg you to do so. so (Gets down on kness) please please please please update asap

oh dear lord, it's Lina Inverse. her long spella will put anyone to sleep. why did you pick her?

the last 4 chaps were great i just have 1 ? was that japenese u were using i noticed a cuple of words similar to that language email me at with answer thank

I really enjoyed reading this story. You really explain youself and that's a good thing, because some people (me included) didn't know anything about the anime "Slayers" (I think that's what you said) but you explained enough so that it was understandable. Thanx.