that was great. hope there's a sequel

Wow. I'm not really a c/7 fan but I gotta say the way you put them together was a lot better than the show's writers. This story was so poignant, if bittersweet. I loved every minute of it.

Oh well done! I adored this so much and it was the perfect ending! :D I know this fic is nine years old now but can you write more C/7 Voyager fics?

Thanks for writing! :)

scifiromance

Oh, angst! Lots of good, conversational, in character angst. I love it! :)

Oh, you wrote their dialogue wonderfully! :)

Wow, this chapter was immensely impressive! WELL DONE for writing so beautifully about such dark content.

I have one question though, did the Doctor delete his own memory files so that he'd didn't need to cope with Seven being raped, or did the Hirogen delete them?

WELL DONE! :D I particularly loved Chakotay in this chapter and how he dealt with both Seven and the Captain.

WELL DONE! Every sentence of this was perfect, I particularly liked the line "Dread washed over her like a menacing waterfall", very nice. :)

This is so sad for poor Seven, but you describe what she's going through so well! Your characterisation of all the other crewmembers was also brilliant. :)

The nightmare was really well written and B'Elanna was brilliant in this chapter, with both Janeway and Seven. I personally think Janeway is a hypocite when it comes to the paradox of being an individual but also blindly following orders.

I really do love this fic, it's one of my favourites. I'm re-reading it again and thought I'd review every chapter this time. Your characterisation is perfect. :)

Speechless here!

With only 9 chapters you managed to give the whole C/7 more body and soul than the writers managed in the whole seasons!

And the best, and yet most touching part of all it was believable. To the letter!

I was more honest and real than anything that happened on the show between them!

The whole story was a solid and good read! The character felt authentic and the whole plot progressed evenly.

You embodied some great moments there with the right choice of words and gave all of it something deeper.

I’m glad I came across this one…although somewhat late.

Kudos.

Keep it up!

Really very wonderfully written! You are a talented writer to say the least and the story is beautiful, emotional... yet at the same time both real and cold. The ending was perfect... I myself am, though I'm not too fond to admit, an avid reader of passionate love stories... however, few such elements were in your story and rightly so. It's perfect the way it is, and it would be out of place and character any other way.

I salute you on your great professional writing, and hope to read more of your work in the future!

-KallistoFord

I really enjoyed this. Good job

Finally, you gave us a *reason* for the Seven & Chakotay romance. And it's not just any reason, it's a deep, spiritual and emotional reason! Very well written.