'Vishnu on a Vespa'... 'St. Maggy of Anal Penetration'... honestly you have Max saying some of the funniest expressions I've ever heard! I kept giggling nonstop... not a good sign for someone in the public library. Ah well, I've never denied being weird anyway. I watch a hell of a lot more CSI than is good for me, so the stuff with searching for blood splatter on the clothes does make sense. The murder/framing plot twist is really intriguing, makes me want to find out who it is already! No rush, though, update when you can!

Have a Nice Day rocks. Simply put, it does. Mick's book is the only autobigraphy of any of the superstars I've ever read, and I consider it to be the real eye opener for me in terms of how the road to hitting it big in the world of 'sports entertainment' isn't easy, to say the least. I agree with everything you said in this chapter about paying dues. I personally would never walk that path, I'm too much of a chicken to do so, but I admire everybody else who has.

Argh... this is the reason why I don't like writing matches, I can never make them as vivid or as creative as you did in this chapter! Awesome, awesome, awesome... sorry it took me a while to get to it, life's been crazy. You've heard that the WWE has banned the belly-to-belly suplex from being used in the ring, right? Eh, well, just random information that popped into my head while reading this. Well, on to the next chapter!

I'm a little dense... who's Nikki? Oh well, I'll probably figure out in a while. I honestly can't wait for the match! You do a good job in building it up. If the real WWE storylines were this entertaining I doubt half the fans would be complaining as much. I look forward to the next chapter!

You update pretty quick... I envy you! Ah well, awesome two chapters. I really enjoyed the promo, and as always I like how you combine what's onscreen and what's offscreen into one seamless flow. I agree with you about the Rock as well! He and Jericho are the two guys I really sit up and pay attention to when they get on the mic. Nice explanation on how Max views his way of cutting promos. I'm feeling like a total mark now, I wouldn't know how to analyze an promo like that! Anyway, to the next chapter!

Refreshing. It's been a while since I've a read a story that really draws me into every scene. Props for everything, the execution of the matches, the murder plot twist and the backstage interaction between the workers. Keep this up, I look forward to it.