Okay. Absolutely a fantastic story. Between your writing style and your Betas, you have one of the best stories in fan fiction and now you've stopped writing on this story. If you are having health or personal problems, I'm really sorry but, your story is being greatly missed. I hope that you finish it someday.
Thanks,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

You actually need your NEWT’s in order to be eligible for auror training. Or be consider for recruitment.

I really hate when Harry says that quidditch is just a game b/c i the books harry treats it as much more. Since it is J.K Rowling's story I think u should keep at least a little similar to the book. 1st he's not a seeker and now he's not showing enthusiasm for quidditch, I just want to stop reading. True HP fans wouldn't want to read this. :(

I think it would be better if Harry stayed as seeker. I mean "too big" I don't get it b/c Krum is much older than harry and he is a seeker. ?

Harry is a seeker, that's it. Books clearly state that. Just because James was a chaser doesn't mean Harry has to be a chaser too.

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When the Hogwarts express gets stuck in thick snow, Harry, Hermione, Neville, Luna and the Weasleys have to fend for themselves - with Death Eaters on the loose.

You don't need to be prefect to be head boy and also no Ron would not be better than. Harry for prefect

Noooooo UPDATE

It's been a long time since you updated this story. Have you abandoned it?

I'd just like to say, I have enjoyed this piece of fan fiction immensly, not only does it have an entirely original and fascinating outlook on Harry Potters character, but it also has incorporated some (much needed in my opinion) character development, most notably with Ginny and Lupin. The only critisicms I can offer are that I've spotted the occasional spelling or grammar mistake, but hey no-ones perfect :). I look forward for your next installment, especially playing on the Harry Ginny relationship (I haven't forgotten about that dress).
Good Luck!
Seb J

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Joy. Another started and abandoned story.

I am enjoying the story thus far and was pleased to see Hannah again. PLEASE watch the spelling errors, especially were/where and vial/vile.

Please keep an eye on there/their/they're and to/too/two errors.