Great concept! Like the Pina Colada song :)

This is an absolutely beautiful and well written story.

ah that's really cute. So did you ever bother to write a sequal to this little one-shot? 'Cause I would like to read one.

This is a great fic. I think that it is fine the way it is... sans the *s. I would rather quotations, but I understand the problem, _.

I don't think it needs to be lengthened to include more scenes and all that, because they were already married and committed, and now they know that not only are they committed by arranged marriage, but also that they are mutually compatable. I think it's great JUST the way it is.

awsome story! ty for the fantasy!

Pretty good! You have an amazing imagination. Keep it up! A very Dark little ficlet, don't you think? In a nonsicle, romantic kinda way...(",)

hey, that was great! good job!
~Loves!~

Wow! Although i knew where this was going the instant i started to read ... when it did come through it still got me... good job. My Lord..

m saucy! much hotter than Raj! you rock!

wow. Excellent story! You've got amazing skill! It was slightly predictable that he would end up hooking up wih his own wife, but still very very good. It would've sucked had it ended any other way :P
Anways, great story, awesome talent!

Interesting concept... and very well-written, if abrupt. There was never really any doubt that she'd end up his wife, but I think this would make a great extended fic if you wanted to extend it.
Very, very good. Mind if I borrow the plot idea? I really need somethng to base my current SS/OC on.

That was FANTASTIC!

Hey! I loved your story it was soo sweet! And smart...! How did you come up with that? You are such a talented writer! I hope you continue writing and I've GOT to add you to my favourites! Keep writing!

Luv, me.

Excellent fic!

You have executed an unusual idea with flair. I like this fic A Lot.

I'd love to see a sequel, maybe dealing with the shock of their acquaintances and friends to the change in their relationship?

That was so cool! I loved it, even when it was het, I loved it!