Oooh I really like this. _~

OH MY BABY!

Yay! He got to the boat! Vair good, vair well written, I wish I lived in America becuase my beloved Holes and my beloved Zero are still in cinemas and I've seen it five times now. Anyway, keep writing!

hey kick ass story i love zero ::pets zero's fluffy hair while zero struggles to get away:: hehe ur not goin any where at least not yet anyway HE'S MINE MINE ALL MINE! MAWHAHAHA

sry get at little weird if i don't have enough sugar must go find sugar hastala buh bye

That's so cool. Zero's my fav character :D Awesome story

Very nice. Very nice, indeed. This story has real potential; it has a few spacing mistakes, some slight adressing issues, and I personally think it would be better without the song, but it has some real potential, as you do as well, as an author.

I really like the idea of what you're doing; filling in the holes. A few more great ideas like this and you'll be on your way. :)

You might want to consider getting a hold of a beta reader; it'd bring your stories up to their full potential. If you want me to look over anything, just e-mail me.

Love,

Emily

*squeals* aw love it! I wuv zerokins! you should continue this and tell about his feelings when stanley arrives and they climb up god's thumb. kudos!

Whe, Zero songfic! Anyways, I thought it was pretty cool, good on you :D

awesome zero is by far my fav

O omg omg omFg! that was so realistic and awesome! more please!and I LOVE that song! creed rox!

*talley~

Oh... that was great. Just... great. Really made my day.