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I think you made that way too easy for videl. When gohan first entered the chamber he collapsed and was much stronger than she is. Videl wouldn't be used to the increased gravity.

This is really suspenseful! I like how you gave Gohan the spotlight once again in the Buu Saga, very unlike in the Anime, when he was weaker than his father. However, the ending was quite a cliffhanger, and yes, it did make me mad at first, but then it made me want to see the second part really bad. I am looking forward to your writing/manga! Great Job!

This story almost had me in tears

i liked the book but hated the ending when gohan died and could not come back to life using the dragon balls

chapter 2 was probably the worst chapter you ever did its just like the show

Best/saddest story I've read in a long time. I must have cried for about 10 minutes. The heartbreak in the story, the sacrifices, and Vegeta's personality change were gut wrenching. I wish you made a sequel.

This story is incredible. I almost teared up at the end of it when Gohan sacrificed himself, absolutely amazing writing.

whens next one?
its amazing

This story is so sad

This is how DBZ should have been!
Now don't get me wrong, I am absolutely heart broken, and will never forgive you for killing Gohan.
But it was an absolutely perfect, and epic, story!

*Favorite: Story*

This was amazing. This has to be one of my favorite fanfics ever. The beginning of the story wasn't all that original but the way the story was told, the timing, keeping the characters realistic, and the way it ended were all superb. The ending was physically draining, it was one of the most emotional and unexpected edings I have ever read and I enjoyed every second of it. Gohans choice left me throughly drained and slightly depressed but I wouldn't change a thing. You truly are a skilled writer it is unfortunate that you no longer contribute to my Gohan and Videl addiction.

this is my 2nd favorite fanfic ever the ending was so sad i cried for like 5 minutes i wish gohan and videl could be together in the end tho otherwise it was perfect i give it a 9.75/10 great fic

I...CANT...BELIEVE...YOU...KILLED...GOHAN! WHY DID YOU KILL MY PRECIOUS GOHAN! YOU DESTROYED HIS SPIRIT! Ok, enough of me ranting and raving about this... I just finished reading, and I absolutely love the story. It really shows what great potential all the saiyans (yes, im mostly talking about Gohan) are possible off. Although, I have to tell you, that for some reason I really hated that you just switched Gohan's and Vegeta's place with the Z Sword. I really don't know why, but it ticks me off alot for some reason. Seeing the rest of your story I just felt that you could've made up something better for that situation. Besides the little switch, and the fact that you KILLED EVERYTHING ABOUT GOHAN I think Toriyama should seriously consider animating this, and getting rid of the ridiculous end they had to the DBZ series in the first place. Now, that is just my opinion, so I don't expect some Goku fanboys showing up at my house with some chainsaws and axes. I havn't read the sequel but I've got to say, I'm really looking forward to it, and encourage you to update, add another chapter, etc. whenever you can because you have no idea how many people love your writing. And I also have to say: this story at the very end made me cry my heart out, and even though I'm a sap for movies I am not for books, because I am one of those critics out there that will blow up at the littlest mistakes (besides spelling errors and nonsense like that) so you did outstanding! Made me cry. Thank you so much for writing this unforgettable story, and I am so lucky to have been able to read it. Authors like you make me look at my own writing and want to improve beyond improving. Again, Thank-you for writing it and I give you 9/10 stars. (I would give you 10/10 but I really dont like it that you killed Gohan ENTIRELY, I mean I wouldn't have minded if he went to Otherworld and could be brought back, but it really tugged at my heart to see that you completely killed him. Well, sorry for the stupidly long response, but I wanted to voice my opinion and I will thank you again for probably the tenth time, THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING STORY AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! :D

wow. i didnt know allowed manuscripts of the anime series.

how creative.