nice story

The way you write it makes me picture it in my head! :)
And if you have me picturing the scenes in my head, you are a really amazing author!

This is by far the best Princess Mononoke fanfiction I have read on this site and in the Internet as well. I can't remember how many times I have read it, again and again. The characters are In Character, the OCs are very well written, and the story seems like if was a real continuation of the film, even the open ending seems very Ghiblish! xD.

Yet, I felt like an epilogue was missing. The ending was great, don't get me wrong, but still, I would have wanted to see San and Ashitaka with their baby at the end, or at least see how they would organize to live as a family. It also leave me wondering of how Ashitaka would cure his re-appeared curse this time, with no Great Forest Spirit to cure him...but again, this is just my personal appreciation. Maybe I'm a sucker for close and happy endings but that's me. You write your story as you please.

Thanks for writting this beautiful story for the Princess Mononoke fandom, there are few good stories about this Miyazaki's masterpiece and so it was a pleasure to read your fic :)

Kao-chan.

For every dialogue, u need to start a new paragraph.

Come on! Lets get some action already! Woot!

Not trying to be crude, but I think they should fight. I'm sorry! It's in my nature to fight to the end. Even though the fight is useless.

Da Fuk?

I knew bring San to town would not be a good idea. I was surprise that u gave San a makeover. Dude, u blew me out of the water. I'm not sure if that was bad or good.

Eboshi is one of my favorite character in my life that I look up to. Some day I wish to be like her.

Things...are...getting...interesting...

Nice.

I was wondering where did she get those red markings on the face. At least u made use of that to the story. Good job.

I just wanted to tell u that I'm in live with for story now. I love the details u put into this chapter.

Wow, this story was intense. And very well written! Good job :)

I don't remember how many times I have read this story, I fell in love with it. It is very beautiful and I have to say one of the best fan fictions out there. It has a very good resemblance to the movie in plot and development. The characters are also pretty accurate, reading this while listening to Mononokehime's soundtrack was very powerful, it gave me goosebumps and its not just from the music. It is a pleasure and an honour reading this, but I can't say it's perfect it does need to go deeper into explaining some things. The ending is simply amazing but there could have been some changes to make it so much better than it already is. Good job and I hope you keep up with whatever you do.