Reviews for Second Chance
KND Universe chapter 3 . 3/21/2015
KND: finally there is a fanfic about Usagi and Goku
Milk: but i'm the wife of Goku
Bill Cipher: let's be honest you're very grumpy instead Usagi is friendly which makes it perfect for Goku
chris happel chapter 6 . 8/29/2014
it's a really good story and really wish you would finish it
Sonic Thunder Saiyan Turtle chapter 6 . 5/22/2014
Please continue this story! I like it!
Lucyole chapter 6 . 7/29/2013
very interesting and exciting story i like it its really good please write further on that would be cool.
*lots of cookies for you*
ChibiHime06 chapter 6 . 10/22/2012
No way it was getting interesting!
ChibiHime06 chapter 4 . 10/22/2012
oh I really wish you would pick this one back up!
ChibiHime06 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
I know this story wont be continued if it wasn't finished...but I like it so far...kinda dark.
aljnaz chapter 6 . 6/10/2012
i actually like this story!i also love Sailor Jupiter as well, please continue it! can you also check out my story as well? its the same crossover as yours, its called A New world A New History :) i really like this! 3
MoonDragon789 chapter 6 . 1/19/2012
I LOVE this story. Please continue, PLEASE!
Lord Mortensen chapter 6 . 10/18/2011
Can you update this fanfic? is amazing, please!
GSP224 chapter 6 . 6/21/2011
This is a really good story you def should continue it
HollowGoku90's chapter 6 . 5/16/2011
wow this story made be in teh edge of my seat. i like you made this story.
Ground Spirit Minerva chapter 6 . 4/20/2011
I have to admit it, is a very good story. And inevitably I'm here commenting despite nearly 10 years since you've upgraded, I don't know if you'll read this message (actually I doubt it).

Just going to tell you, it will seem crazy, but a few days ago I started writing a fan fiction very similar to yours (not knowing of the existence of this). The same fan fic set in the first seasons of Sailor Moon, but I started from the appearance of Sailor Venus and enemies of the Dark Kingdom were Zoisite and Kunzite.

Goku reaches the city of Tokyo to participate in the Martial Arts Tournament, and there in a moment discovers Tuxido Kamen with Zoisite fighting him to get the two crystals Rainbows that he possessed, Goku saves Mamoru and makes a deal with him get the Silver Crystal, not knowing about Sailors Senshis.

Meanwhile, Usagi's family asked her and her brother Shingo to accommodate a bodyguard for the care of her family, Usagi decides to raise Goku after a very special event that took her and Naru on the morning of the same day. The fan fic called Manifest Destiny and I have both version in Spanish and English (although the English version is "translated" as my native language is Spanish).

It's funny, but unfortunately I have included in my fic many things that you've already built into your own, such as the reactions of Usagi's family about Goku, Ikuko feeling comfortable and happy with him as the same Shingo seeing a potential hero action, although the reaction of "my" Kenji is somewhat different with him, but there is a scene where he gets angry with Goku to get to have the idea that he might be the boyfriend of his young daughter Usagi.

I really regret this fact, is the first time it happens, I want to produce something original and inevitably get something similar to what you have done the same.

As for your fic, well, I guess I cannot say too much, I like a lot! If after all we focus on creating a similar plot, I guess we'll have some thoughts in common. The pair of Goku/Usagi seems simply beautiful, but in my position I take some things from them that never quite build in, and as said by some commenters here, I am of those people who think that the characters must stay with original couples, though in truth I don't disturb the character of Chichi, however, is my favorite female character DB.

I really enjoyed above all the importance he gave to Goku with the Dark Kingdom, in my fic has something similar, although Zoisite just hates him...

I don't know if you get to read this message, if you're active on this site and only this fic you have not updated in a long time, but I would like you to pass by my profile and read my fan fiction Manifest Destiny, comment and give me your opinion, I notice that the English version may have some grammatical errors and expressions errors. Above all I would like the opinion of "my twin fic" haha I've already named you so... I've really taken by surprise with this story, I never imagined I would see something like this in the network of Fanfiction.

I say goodbye, and send this to my favorite fan fic, but not finished updating, I liked a lot and deserves to be among my favorites.

I send a greeting and success

Ground Spirit Minerva - Marianela Paula Vázquez
angel313 chapter 6 . 9/26/2010
Please finish this story. It is so good.
Cybertronian Kaijuruto chapter 6 . 5/18/2010
good story so far. but i just saw the date sand im wondering when is the update
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