Wonderful! Great characterization (especially that of the Mharysuh)! Insert seven hundred exclamation points here!

I wonder if it's any coincidence that Suzee's name is so similar to Mary-Sue...

Excellent Mary Sue parody. Brilliant.

This was great. Nice ending, too.
The writing wasn't completely smooth, but I was reading fast, too. So that might just be me.

Have I told you lately that I LOVE YOU?

Hahahahahahahaha! I can't breathe! Hahahahahaha! Yes, yes. Mary Sues can never be destroyed. I loved how you put in the Animorphs crossover reference, and commented on how Suzee is close to a Mary Sue. So true! I was laughing my ass off!

Overall, the fic was extremely well thought out. It's just what I needed after a stressful day at school. :-)

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Oh dear Lord, thank you! So, The Mighty Ducks fandom ISN'T the only one suffering from the dreaded Mary-Sue Infestation? How wondrous the ways of writers...