Reviews for Cradle
kitlin chapter 22 . 3/21/2016
Love your story. A really unique take on the hellsing story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading
Abridged chapter 22 . 12/1/2015
My writing might be shitty but i just wanted to say that I thoroughly enjoyed your story which is odd to me because i thought i would hate it due to it being Alucard v Seras keep up the good work
kinigget chapter 5 . 8/31/2015
None of this makes any sense and the purple prose is getting annoying
Vampiresschan07 chapter 22 . 9/7/2013
AWESOME!
Now thats what you call a great story! Ive been searchin around ff for great stories but damn why didnt I see this earlier! This was simply the best for me! Thank you so much for writing this!
It has a well played plot! by that, I mean very well. And its very exciting too! Packed with action, thrill and suspense. Glorious! ...and just so you know, this kept me awake and I wouldnt sleep till I finish it! (though, I caught on the story very quickly which Im really proud of! Hahaha)

A sequel sounds good..or maybe even a little sneak peak will do. Im very intrigued of what will happen to Seras after. Actually, even if the ending was good enough to finish the story I just cant help but think how Seras is going to live with that smug bastard again. Lol.
Im a fan of romance but I wouldnt count on it happening everytime in this kind of story. that would be just so... Okay, forgive me for my ramblings but you do get me...right?
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So yeah, and the characters were so awesome! And I like Seras here! she's sooo strong! But the thing is, I really dont mind Alucard getting knocked down twice or more by his fledgling, thats cool, but I noticed how you used the word that he's oftenly caught off guard. idk how many but you repeated it several times.. i thought Alucard was getting rusty but with the tampering of the scientist i guess thats understandable he'd been so surprised of the results.. the pyro-thingy was awesome!

Anyway that was all it! The story is pretty much still stuck that i think i was able to type this much. Just wow!
And hey, its been four years come back! XD
Guest chapter 22 . 1/8/2013
sequel please please!
PAMILA DE CASTRO chapter 21 . 8/4/2012
nossa esta fanfic é muito boa, abraços
Heidilynn08 chapter 22 . 2/18/2012
Such an amazing story. I love seeing Seras like this. So very brutal. I do wish that Alucard didnt best her.

Thank you for taking the time to write this. Its been a pleasure. A truly great pleasure.

Keep it up!
WoahThereBuddy chapter 22 . 1/18/2012
Oh my, this story was trully amazing! At first it seemed quite complicated, but over time it became trully awesome. I was almost in tears when I thought that Alucard killed Seras and Averas, but my hope was restored. The ending was great. Don't stop writing stories like this one.
Melody Lynn Kamiya chapter 22 . 10/11/2011
should have a sequel!
icediamond7 chapter 21 . 4/8/2011
Awesome story!

May i ask, are you going to continue your other unfinnished stories or have you given up on them?
darkraistlyn chapter 22 . 10/7/2010
This was an excellent story. So dark!
The Mystics chapter 22 . 8/15/2010
this is really really AWESOME~! (-) I hope you make more stories like this
The Layman chapter 21 . 5/27/2010
Very good. Do any of your other stories have Amielia in them?
December05th chapter 21 . 7/8/2009
I loved this story stayed up till 1.15 lol just to finish it. I thought it very clever your choice of name for the baby. Avera - 'a sin against man or God'
darkyamicreator chapter 22 . 5/26/2009
It was a good story, while there are a few things that should be revised, there is no need for a sequel. A sequel would be demeaning as the story has a proper ending.
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