Reviews for Lone Child
Sakura Lisel chapter 26 . 7/15
James should have also pointed out to Snape exactly WHAT gave the greaseball the idea that James and Triss were 'fucking' when HE came bursting in and threw back the curtains to James bed, and found James AND Tris STILL fully dressed, and simply eyes closed, possibly snoring while holding each other simply SLEEPING together when HE rudely woke them up with his screaming and accusations? Or does the greaseball seriously think they were somehow having sex while still fully clothed in the SAME clothes they had on the last time he saw both of them?
SupaChenz AA chapter 33 . 5/23
ugh, must we have this 'stuff' in the story?
NazgulBelserion chapter 1 . 2/6
Honestly I fkin detested how you named him James it's so confusing sometimes Should of just named him Hadrian and be done with it
TheEmbodimentOfSins chapter 1 . 1/26
I’m not gonna sugar coat this shit.

Fuck off.

I’m not gonna continue reading this while it’s in this ridiculous form, SPACE YOUR PARAGRAPHS DAMN IT!
TheEmbodimentOfSins chapter 1 . 1/26
So was the a/n the end of ch 1?
HalfbloodHeir chapter 1 . 12/29/2019
what in the ever loving fuck is this shit?
Guest chapter 10 . 10/20/2019
even though James has super Saiyan abilities or Hulk power it is all useless because of the "Canon". yes intelligence suddenly disappears like an amnesia, why doesn't he take the stone before the canon event. yeah congratulations don't have to train hard because it's useless
Kushka chapter 45 . 8/6/2019
Great story
Vampireking40 chapter 25 . 2/4/2019
So what did Snape what to see James about after lunch. The chapter ended before that meeting could happen.
Vampireking40 chapter 20 . 2/4/2019
Someone must have convinced Fudge to not only fire Arthur Weasly but also send a 11 year old to prison. It oftens seem that Fudge never thinks before he speaks as the majority of the Wizardgamont would never send a 11 year child to prison for life. I say it was Regulus Black who is still a big puzzle to me seeing that if he has a son at Hogwarts shouldn't that son be a Slytherin like his father and not a Gryffindor like his uncle Sirius.
Vampireking40 chapter 17 . 2/4/2019
The part in this story that does not make since is where James Potter conjures the snake it just does not seem like something a Potter would do. Also is James Potter talking to the snake and does it understand him when he tells him to attack James Cage. We know Cage can talk to snakes but can James Potter also talk to snakes.
Vampireking40 chapter 15 . 1/26/2019
There was one mistake. Creevy was listed in place of Reeves for the Gryffindor team announcement.
Vampireking40 chapter 12 . 1/26/2019
Who won the house cup.
Vampireking40 chapter 11 . 1/26/2019
I take it nobody knows that James is the one who got rid of Voldermort.
Vampireking40 chapter 4 . 1/26/2019
So would it be a safe bet to guess that Severus Snape is James father and Dragon is possibly Lilly father.
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