I've said it before, but I'll say it again. You are SO good! And I still adore your future stories, and your Usa stories. I lvoe your writing style, and the deep thought and feeling in your stories. I loved this one, and how it had two main plots going on that intersected with each. Wonderful work!

That was soo sweet! i'd love to read a story about her search and hopefully eventual finding of her parents. Would you consider writing it, please?

Oh, this was just as good as the rest of them, you really have a knack for these stories!

Good-o! That was a great story, I never really thought about those four having birthdays, or a history before Neherenia...but you got me thinking Hope more Neo Moon stories are on the way!

LA

how sweet!

Well, that's nice. I finish one story, and then get an e-mail saying you have a new story up. _

"I'm going to the surprise birthday party you're throwing for me tonight."

_ I'll bet no one related to Serenity is a good liar when it comes to this kind of thing. _

"I never would have guessed!"

_ I love it when Hotaru-chan acts like that. _

"She doesn't count, either."

I suppose not. _

'Serenity claimed the first piece and was loudly criticized by her daughter for jumping ahead of Hotaru.'

Ah, you capture their personalities so well!

"Should I do a strip tease for him?"

_ Hey, she said any means necessary. _

"Maybe it's an engagement ring,"

_ Ah, I suppose there's a Minako in every generation, huh?

"That's what I'd like to know, young lady,"

...*winces* Uh-oh...

"Yutaka and Hotaru, sitting in a tree,"

_ She wasn't concentrating, was she?

"You said she'd probably get her donkey eaten by a big snake."

*raises eyebrow* Donkey, eh? _

"That's because they have morning too early in the morning, too."

Yes. Yes they do.

"Nothing."

...She's not thinking about anything? *thinks for a moment* Yes, she couldn't possibly be thinking about traveling back in time to see her past, could she? _

'Suddenly the air was split by a very loud string of curses and invectives.'

Well, she's home, obviously.

"Your Papa may be needing your abilities again VERY SOON."

_ Yes, and Michiru wouldn't be the one helping her to need Hotaru's abilities, would she?

"She's going to give you a pretty dolly to say 'thank you'!"

*giggles* Well, let's just hope it wasn't supposed to be a surprise. _

I love how you pay attention to the minor characters. I really do. Especially since I started liking ignored/under-appreciated characters for some reason.

~C-chan, the Cardboardian insomniac