aww poor toma. he's becoming my fav character in all this

i love this you

what a great story! I loved everything in it , but it could use more yaoi.
going to read the next part now

Great story! I really enjoyed it. I loved the blending of the two universes and the unique spin you put on Kyou's place within the Zodiac. Brilliant job!

Wow... it took me about 3 days to finish it, but it was well worth it. There were some minor grammar errors, but othewise you have a wonderful way with story telling. Great job! :D

i thought Kureno had black hair?..or at least dark brown

-Pirategoddess

flows smoothly, nice work :D

Forever Kool

-Pirategoddess

well i think it rock

coolio ;D

peace out

~Pirategoddess

wow u r evil...rock on \m/

i suppose im not one to talk

catch ya later

~Pirategoddess

aw beautifully done! no one could have done better

unless the creatures of these got together to do it but i very highly doubt that would ever happen so yea, awesome

have a awesome new years

-Pirategoddess

just a tiny mistake i noticed...microscopic...uh Ayame looked at himself a little bit longer...um kidda creepy.

Ayame never seizes to amaze me...

u r 1 sick indivitual...

i mean that is just wrong...even for Akito

i hope u get nothing fro christmas

and have a horrible new years

-Pirategoddess

awesome!i need not say more

Forever Kool

-Pirategoddess

omg it fits perfectally...ok im done

Forever Kool

-Pirategoddess

oh interesting ur story rocks

although i don't kno how reviewing to a already finished story does any good but i just have to say this is something else...i mean that in a good way...

i knew Tohru wasn't human...haha...i kno just a story...

Tohru's a bird...don't cats eat birds or at least attack them...if i were Tohru i would be scared of Kyo for that reason...

yeai kno she is unaware of it...

nevermind

Forever Kool

-Pirategoddess

Love this story!