| Reviews for The Catalyst |
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  Guest chapter 10 . 5/5 What? F#ck the "meat & potatoes." This is actually good writing, so rare on this site... It is FABULOUS as-is. Ignore the cretins. Release the kraken. |
 nekochan1994 chapter 25 . 9/12/2014 1.) I'm really sorry you discontinued this as I found it very interesting. I hope someday you get the inspiration again. 2.) Might I suggest trying to rewrite it. 3.) Jareth is an ass 4.) I felt in your story Sarah did not have much of a place. I also miss Ludo, sir Didymus, & Hoggle. In addition, in your story you never explained why the Exiles were never present & why the city looked so different. |
| nekochan1994 chapter 24 . 9/12/2014 poor Toby. I wonder what his daily life is like? |
| nekochan1994 chapter 23 . 9/12/2014 O.O Oh my. |
| nekochan1994 chapter 22 . 9/12/2014 TT-TT |
| nekochan1994 chapter 21 . 9/12/2014 Teach her a lesson?! |
| nekochan1994 chapter 20 . 9/12/2014 Nope. Still on Sarah's side. Don't see why they didn't just explain everything to her. Whether they believe or not, she can be very reasonable, especially when it's her brother in danger. |
| nekochan1994 chapter 19 . 9/12/2014 1.) What plans? 2.) Even though Sarah is being a bit emotional, it's understandable. From what I understand, she's being jerked around & has no idea what's going on while being under a lot of stress. In fact, I am completely on her side on this one. |
| nekochan1994 chapter 18 . 9/12/2014 1.) ... Wow. Jareth must have been a slut. 2.) Delicious images (but guilty) 3.) Vane. I think you took it too far. 4.) I am thoroughly disgusted with what they make the servants do. |
| nekochan1994 chapter 17 . 9/12/2014 Why exactly is everyone so excited about Toby? Or rather why would the entire Underground if it ever got found out Thank you for mentioning his brothers. I was wondering what became of them. |
| nekochan1994 chapter 16 . 9/12/2014 1.) I like the High King 2.) Jareth & everyone else except Sarah are assholes. Sure she's being a bit blind but like you said she is a very direct person. And Jareth had no business keeping her like that. It drives me insane that he has power over her. I hope she finds a why to get out of it. |
| nekochan1994 chapter 15 . 9/12/2014 That was rather abrupt. Ceinwyn could have been used later after the major battles. She could have asked Sarah something that would have ruined whatever sense of peace there was. |
| nekochan1994 chapter 14 . 9/12/2014 1.) How come Sarah didn't see any of the Sidhe or the real city during her first run? 2.) ... Sarah is going to kill him for that. |
| nekochan1994 chapter 13 . 9/12/2014 Oh my! x3 |
| nekochan1994 chapter 12 . 9/12/2014 O.O ... Wait a damn minute... are you saying... Jared & Bran...?! |
