| Reviews for Whitefriars Lane |
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   srig chapter 1 . 4/4/2013 No exit D wonderful! |
| Angie chapter 1 . 7/30/2005 Yes, a sequel would be very nice indeed. I too feel strongly Xellos should not get away with such an evil thing is WRONG! INJUST! *GACK!* I sound like Amelia!That is so sick, 'cuz i fucking hate her!Ahem... anyway nice fic. |
| Neko Baka Z chapter 1 . 10/6/2003 oh, dark disturbing fic! nice! **grins** Rainjewel, you did it again, another really excellent fanfic, although you might want to watch editing. A random word in there that just didn't fit, I believe 'hands' instead of 'fingers', for example. But hey, I do that sometimes too. Other than that, it's really really really GOOD! You so need to continue on, and please don't give it a fluffy ending. ~Zika |
| Jassy chapter 1 . 9/7/2003 Yes! do a sequel! you must! you can't leave it at that! Please! Sequel sequel sequel! By the way, it was good! i liked it! oh well, g2g, Ja! |
| Sunatic chapter 1 . 9/7/2003 Yes, do a sequel! I command you! We want more! I just loved this, let the story continue. Please! _ |
| ex-angel lazy chapter 1 . 9/6/2003 good good, as always. i like the details of zel's past, they add nicely. great job. |
| Iisjah chapter 1 . 9/6/2003 A sequel? And you ask! Of course we want a sequel. Isn't this right my fair pokemon? Pika! You hear him. We want a sequel! PS I don't like pokemon as a anime but I adore those kawaii, fluffy things ekhem pokemons. |
| Beedoo chapter 1 . 9/5/2003 Way awesome fic. Incredible writing. *Oliver Twist voice* Please, rainjew'l, may I have sommor? |
| Yugure chapter 1 . 9/5/2003 I luv this story! It's so icky-dark and gruesome and mentally terrifying. Especially the ending... *shivers* Surely I'm not the only one who likes disturbing dark fics? As for a sequel... well, having read your writing, I would want to demand ANYTHING else that you could write because I really like your style. I think this fic could stand alone on its own... it has a tragic ending but it works. Fluffiness would indeed be a cop out. |
| Mondbat chapter 1 . 9/5/2003 Oh, I love your fic, the way you wrote it and the plot. Great job! It need a sequel, please! |
| Sar-kaz-m chapter 1 . 9/5/2003 O! Very cool story. I like Evil!Xelloss and Empathic!Zelgadis. That's a neat touch by the way: if Zel was truly empathic, in the psychic sense of the word, then his coldness is a defence mechanism... And that it was all machination to get Zelgadis! OO! I can't wait for Chapter 2! -Cheers, -Chibi-Kaz |
