Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

OMG. I've just realized I read this story four years ago. HAHA Well, I'm going back to re-read it then!

First chapter is AMAZING. It's written so wonderfully well, and it's so beautifully poetic in a way. I'm already drawn in, so I'm hoping the rest will be good. XD I can't believe this was written 14 years ago, but even so, I'm glad it's completed, so I can go and read all of it!

OMG. This was such a wonderful story. I love the whole ending & how it ties to the overall story. It was really good! I'm even more happy that I ran across it & it was a FINISHED story! XD

this is another great story. you're really gifted in writing stories. I hope you'll continue writing stories like this, specially stories about harry and cho with a happy ending. I really love them and I think they make a good pair. )

what? it can't end there! this is an awesome story why would you end this? :(

That was awesome! The end was kind of confusing..but still awesome!

Ahh... reading this story again brings back memories... :D Amazing story LogicalRaven! :D

LogicalRaven, I just want you to know that I have enjoyed and will still continue enjoying this story for the rest of my life... Yes, I am admitting - I love this story very VERY very much! :D

And I ask for forgiveness that I only reviewed now... But, I have my reasons... Keep up the good work anyway. ;)

By the way, you have my encouragement if you would want to become professional... I would even buy your books. Hehe... ;)

it is true that this story has a few holes that just doesn't add up, but you can't say it is unrealistic. It's just that the story itself is rather bony, what i mean is that it seems to be something between an outline and an actual story.

If you had developed these scenes a bit more then it will be very realistic, and since this is fan fiction, the term "canon" is just a loosely based ideology that people want a story that's the same as the book but different. which doesn't make too much sense.

The romance between Cho and Harry was, in my opinion, very under developed. I just feel that everything is too theoretical, meaning it can happen, just.. very unlikely that they would react the way they did in your story.

overall, i think this story is very good, but lack the grand climatic ending of a suspense story.

thank you for writing this,

SoA

That was a really, really sweet story. Almost as good as your trilogy, which I read earlier.

Quite a bit OC, no real plot to speak of and rather shaky, but you've developed Harry and Cho's relationship in a beautiful way which is far nicer than many other HPCC fics.

Just finished reading and i must say it was a good story.

hello hello hello!

I have seen you around alot on reviews and fav authors of all of MY fave authors, so I reckoned you must be GOOD, and I have read your stories and you ARE. Really good.

I like what you are doing with this story!

Please, please, please, would you read my story, 'a Tale of Perserverance' by me, lime-oku?

I really need feedback, and at last count, I only had like, 2 reviews, plus one which i sent to myslef...

PLEAsE READ!/?

Wow, amazing :) When I started reading this, I wanted to stop.. but something about it made me want to finish it. And good thing too, or I woulda missed a great ending.. or err "the beginning" _

It is simply one of the most, if not the most, amazing fanfic I have ever read! Some fantastic imagination is involved here...

...at least until you decided to end the story in such a, pardon the irony, cliched way. Fortunately, in the scale of things, only a little taint to an otherwise wonderfully written story.

Much thanks!