please update

Now, if Tommy had just come out and admitted the truth, Merton wouldn't have even had to leave in the first place.

Ah, what a lovely twist XD Nice work! I take it that this is a one shot?

HEY! Arent you going to continue! That was good! Urgh!

youre probably not even into big wolf on campus anymore but i decided to write a review anyway because this was a great start toa story, to bad you didnt continue it.

Totally kawaii! I loved it! I wish you would have included more on his arrival, but this was awesome. The doddles were adorable, I especially liked your writing style and am looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future!

You are totally right about this fandom needs everything it can get, especially slash, but your story was one of the best I've read. Seriously. *grins* *glomps author* *waves*

Later yo,

Icy

OMG...this is great!PLease keep it going!

That was ADORABLE!

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I agree with Mallory, a montage of Merton-drawings is a bit suspect. There could be cute little doodles of Tommy and Merton doing things together, like fighting bad guys and watching Buffy. But then, you'd need another reason for Merton to pack up and move back to Pleasantville... Hmm.

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But other than that, this is one of the best BWOC fics I've read so far. You captured a lot of the cute fluffiness we love so much in the series.

Well? Aren't you going to _up_date? You _can't_ just leave it _there_! What the hell is _wrong_ wiht you? . Add another chapter! I wan't more, dammit! .

~Fallen Angel

NO! You MUST update! Please? *sad puppy eyes of DOM* I absolutely LOVE this. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
Much *evil* love,
Sarah

*claps* love the end of that chapter, ur gonna update soon cause I enjoyed that alot, expecally making Tommy have some sort of talent other than beating the shit outta bad guys, update soon okay

oi... so, that has to be the cutest, sweetest thing I've read in a long long time! I think I'll seriously have to die if you don't update more, and soon... *panics*

You have to finish this I can't wait to see how it turns out!

Were you looking through my notebooks again, Oblique? Anyways, this fic is super! I love Merton's point of view, and it seems so in character as well. The spacing was better in this than in your second fic, but the writing in both was great. You'd better keep writing more, savvy?

This is way too cute! I love the idea of Merton finding a bunch of drawings/doodles from Tommy. Hee hee. Awesome! YOu made me smile.