It was an awesome story ! I loved it !

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Chap13 was great, something about Ty's wings quivering in fear is a good thing to imagine and the suspicion from all the teens-just their entire reaction was great! Also that prophecy thing you did in Chapter6 was very well done, that sort of thing always gives me chills and you certainly had me going. I gotta admit though I had initially thought on this one that it was going to be a return from death thing-otherworld influence you know (I do like that sort of thing) cause of the wings &prologue you know? But when you mentioned about that virus striking while he was in the water, before saying that DRagoon helped him survive I knew that wasn't the case. The ending wasn't too mushy though I thought Noche seeing the light was a bit cliche however T&D's merge & Kai's 'death' were all very good. The line "I am a wind Dragon am I not" had me grinning like crazy for some reason and I'm glad Tala survived though isnt Zeo blue haired? The whole white tiger clan, ghosts and angel sitings for generations gives it a nice final ring...like they're going to somehow be there for all eternity or something. Truly enjoyed the way this fic has slowly unfolded itself, all the little suprises, characters, interaction. It didn't drag in a bad way, good description, grammer could do with some revamping but all the clues cleverly piecing together and Tenshi's new hair/eye colour, and of course the wings (his actual appearance then) just fits so well and is WAY cool _ Oh yeah & there soo many art images that come to mind...I wish I could see this in animation form(pouts)

Out :: Kawaii! I like the Tenshi/Tyson and Kai disappearing part!

O.C. #2 :: Did you have a beta for this? There were a *lot* of typos and stuff.

Out :: I think I stopped breathing when Kai died...-death-

yay this was an awsome fic I read it all in one day I can't wait to read more of your stories

Heh, heh. cute. i love your stories. some need to be finished though.

hey, that was an awesome story...u should do one with vampires! hehe lol im a little obsessed with vampires...anyways keep writing these good stories!

Awsome!That was awsome

Extraordinary!

you killed Tyson... good job!

Me: GAH! I AM SUCH A FRIGGIN IDIOT! *slams heed into desk* So *blam* Friggin *slam* Stupid *crash* not *bang* to have *blam* Seen this *crash bam boom*
CP: *winces* As you can see, she's really beating herself up over missing this. *angie keeps slamming her head on the desk* Will you cut that out! I'm trying to do a review for you!
Me: O-kay...
Brigs: Sheesh! talk about a dedicated fan...
CP: Yeah, *to FH* She thought the part about Zeo was kinda cute.
Me: And, to apologise for missing so many chappies, Oh great FH-Sama, I'd like to give you a Tala-hugging-Zeo plushie and, a Tenshi-holding-Kai plushie. I hope you like them.

That was fucking brilliant - its gr8 reading a half decent beyfic that has a good plot which leaves you hooked and doesnt suddenly decide not write any more chapters and leave readers hanging. I loved this story it grabbed my attention rite away (good title, summary and the rest) it was very creative with the bey characters. One thing i wish was done was maybe have expanding the after math after of the battle. liked the coupling though i dont see why tala was made out to be dead would it have mattered hes got zeo now - anyways gr8 story :-)

the ending was amazing, as was the story. you kept me hooked the whole time! i hope you create more stories soon, your writing is amazing and im not even a big fan of beyblade! even with that, i loved your story to peices. it was great.

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wow such a nice nice ending to sucha marvelous story!11
GREAT WORK!
Jen