Totally beautiful!

Oh my god, the end. I've probably never cried so hard while reading a ff. Thank you, it's amazing!

My god that was beautiful. Loved how it portrayed Percy in a different light. Most people who read the books see him as a pompous prat but you wrote him as a passionate romantic understanding boy. Well done!

wow, that was good. a little sad, in a way too! excellent work

Aww this is sad. But very well written and I love P/P fics. Great job

so sad! so good! love the last paragraph!

*cries* Thats really good. I always see Percy dying in war for some reason. Mostly to shook his parents. Got to love him.

~Kori

Oh my God.. that made me cry. I couldn't tell you why, because except for a recent strange sort of obsession with the boy, I can't stand Percy. Erf.

I love that story. i also love your site. I have a question for you...are you going to finish your fanfic Hogwarts Summer Camp?

That was really sweet, i really like it nice job

That was a wonderful story.

It seemed so in character, and that is very rare in Percy romance stories.

"Percy Weasley DECIDED to be my boyfriend."

AND

"He had this look-and I knew I was in for it big time, cause he would want

to marry me once he found a job. "

AND

"Percy was never very artistic. Always by the book, always seeing the flat

surface of things. I don't think he would have appreciated that I see his

face in the clouds-see his spirit shooting toward heaven with every jet

stream that an American aircraft leaves streaming through the evening sky."

You've managed to convey a Percy who is very intense, self-confident, logical,

and follows the rules: Rowling's Percy, in fact. And then, after he's done

everything he needs to succeed, he loses. Angst usually makes me laugh,

but this brought tears to my eyes.

NM

oooohhh, i love this fic. I read it on your hermione's world website before this. I am in the midst of writing something only slightly similar to this (a.k.a. Hermione thinking about ron's death). This was so great, I,love your style of writin. I have a new fic up, French Enchantments, can you check it out? PLEASE WRITE MORE STUFF!

Oh my God! That was geniously creative, that was so good! I can even forgive you for killing off Ron, whom I'm madly in love with (even though hes a few years too young for me lol). This is going in my favorites, it's one of the best stories I've read in a really long time. Well, ta ta!

That was really good

Oh man that was something else. I had goosebumps and a knot in my throat. That was extremly sad but in a way it had a happy ending. Even though this is about the 20th time i have read this story it still gets me every time. The love that is shown here is so unreal and unimaginable. I guess love like that only does exist in stories. That was the best story i have ever read by far. Never stop writing. Ever.