I'm really sad that this was never continued, especially at such a climactic point.

Absolutely brilliant, I have to say this is certainly darker than your usual stories, makes me wonder how much darker it would be if FF would get rid of the ban?
After reading just the first chapter I found myself compelled to read all the way through. Shame its not been up dated for a while but life has a funny way with taking away our free time.

If you do get back to it, let me know?
Lyther

While I really Hawk's work, in the wide realm of Love Hina fiction, I'm really, really tired of never seeing anyone tell Tsuruko where can shove her nonsense during this arc.

you don't drop stories eh (you said so in your profile)? well you DO! none of the stories you have written are finished anyway! you should have at least finished this... or handed it out to others. I just don't know why good stories aren't updated!

Awesome! can you update?

I've enjoyed this story.

THE PLACES YOU LEAVE OFF! It's like you get off on our anguish.

Wish there were lots more

Please update this fix tie too good

are you ever going to continue this this is good you aren;t dead are you.

Nice story. Also nice cascade failure on motoko psyche.

Truly a shame you have not continued this work.

Wow! Great, great fic. No chance of an update?

Great story. I must say that your building up was great.

Thanks,

Absolutely evil. You must write more. More, I tell you! More!