| Reviews for The Defeated |
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Animorphgirl chapter 13 . 4/28/2013 This is easily one of the best, most carefully written, and inspiring Animorph fanfics I have ever read. I hope you decide to finish it. |
SuperiorShortness chapter 13 . 2/17/2010 I agree with Anifan1... Geez. YOU NED TO CONTINUE THIS FIC! It's almost over anyways! You can do it! |
Anifan1 chapter 2 . 11/20/2004 Ugh...tried to post where I linked this story, but apparently ffn doesn't like websites very much. So, we'll try again. :) ?boardanimorphsfanfiction&actiondisplay&num1099855836 |
Anifan1 chapter 1 . 11/8/2004 ?boardanimorphsfanfiction&actiondisplay&num1099855836 |
anthropomorphizer chapter 13 . 7/18/2004 Wow! Amazing story! I really enjoyed reading it! Please come out with the ending soon. |
Living in Time chapter 13 . 5/28/2004 Hurray! I'll look for the next part. Now comments: first, I loved the beginning. The way you showed how hope was still alive even after complete subjugation by the Yeerks was beautiful. I use that word to describe your fic a lot, don't I? And also, I get the Games and the whole Village thing now, or at least enough to get by. I really enjoyed the new treaty - it was very realistic not to mention well done. Finally, I want to congratulate you on your style of writing which I find fantastic. You are a captivating "Storyteller" and you have a very original plot, which is so hard to find in fanfics. Thank you so much for your story! |
Living in Time chapter 12 . 5/28/2004 Wow. Not much to say. The last chapter is next, and I'll save most of my comments for it. |
Living in Time chapter 11 . 5/28/2004 I'm kind of confused about the Games. Some sort of training? I liked more of the background information in this chapter although I'm still a little confused about the difference between the Village of the kids and whatever the outside world is. Onto the next chapter! |
Living in Time chapter 10 . 5/28/2004 I liked all of her speeches - she's good at impromptu ones! And the comment about martyrs was amazing - yes people look at them at learn. |
Living in Time chapter 9 . 5/28/2004 I love the random meetings of people who formerly knew each other. The plot is captivating and I love your writing style! |
Living in Time chapter 8 . 5/28/2004 I really liked the passing on of the Storytelling duties to Riae. The references to Old Earth and the Animorphs and all the "ancient" guestures were really good too. |
Living in Time chapter 7 . 5/28/2004 Another amazing chapter. You really are good at writing. |
Living in Time chapter 6 . 5/28/2004 That was a good scene, with Cassandra's old Yeerk. It's sad about Midori though, that life had to be that way for her. |
Living in Time chapter 5 . 5/28/2004 I love it. The combination of the stories and Cassandra's real life is amazing. And the scene from Riae's memories was wonderful too - it really showed what writers can do in this world. |
Living in Time chapter 4 . 5/28/2004 Your descriptions are amazing, and I really like your style, the way you interchange between the story that Cassandra started and her life. *quickly goes to next chapter* |