Reviews for The Defeated
Animorphgirl chapter 13 . 4/28/2013
This is easily one of the best, most carefully written, and inspiring Animorph fanfics I have ever read. I hope you decide to finish it.
SuperiorShortness chapter 13 . 2/17/2010
I agree with Anifan1... Geez. YOU NED TO CONTINUE THIS FIC! It's almost over anyways! You can do it!
Anifan1 chapter 2 . 11/20/2004
Ugh...tried to post where I linked this story, but apparently ffn doesn't like websites very much. So, we'll try again. :)

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Anifan1 chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
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anthropomorphizer chapter 13 . 7/18/2004
Wow! Amazing story! I really enjoyed reading it! Please come out with the ending soon.
Living in Time chapter 13 . 5/28/2004
Hurray! I'll look for the next part.

Now comments: first, I loved the beginning. The way you showed how hope was still alive even after complete subjugation by the Yeerks was beautiful.

I use that word to describe your fic a lot, don't I?

And also, I get the Games and the whole Village thing now, or at least enough to get by.

I really enjoyed the new treaty - it was very realistic not to mention well done.

Finally, I want to congratulate you on your style of writing which I find fantastic. You are a captivating "Storyteller" and you have a very original plot, which is so hard to find in fanfics. Thank you so much for your story!
Living in Time chapter 12 . 5/28/2004
Wow. Not much to say. The last chapter is next, and I'll save most of my comments for it.
Living in Time chapter 11 . 5/28/2004
I'm kind of confused about the Games. Some sort of training? I liked more of the background information in this chapter although I'm still a little confused about the difference between the Village of the kids and whatever the outside world is.

Onto the next chapter!
Living in Time chapter 10 . 5/28/2004
I liked all of her speeches - she's good at impromptu ones!

And the comment about martyrs was amazing - yes people look at them at learn.
Living in Time chapter 9 . 5/28/2004
I love the random meetings of people who formerly knew each other. The plot is captivating and I love your writing style!
Living in Time chapter 8 . 5/28/2004
I really liked the passing on of the Storytelling duties to Riae. The references to Old Earth and the Animorphs and all the "ancient" guestures were really good too.
Living in Time chapter 7 . 5/28/2004
Another amazing chapter. You really are good at writing.
Living in Time chapter 6 . 5/28/2004
That was a good scene, with Cassandra's old Yeerk. It's sad about Midori though, that life had to be that way for her.
Living in Time chapter 5 . 5/28/2004
I love it. The combination of the stories and Cassandra's real life is amazing. And the scene from Riae's memories was wonderful too - it really showed what writers can do in this world.
Living in Time chapter 4 . 5/28/2004
Your descriptions are amazing, and I really like your style, the way you interchange between the story that Cassandra started and her life.

*quickly goes to next chapter*
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