so there is a traitor in their midst after all... :(
good Story!

You should make the child older than 5 for a 5 year old is much too young for this stuff, plus I doubt very much that he would have the physical strength to burry an adult. It takes a lot of strength to dig a grave and burry an adult alone.

Loved it! Great work ;)

Lol, this was evil! I bet it isn't real... Your writing is improving with every chapter. This story is very interesting and unlike anything I've read before. I'm really happy the next chapter is already posted *goes to read*

I am really enjoying this story :P

I knew this was going to be good ;) *goes to read nect chapter*

Lol. This is really good. I saw Shards of Friendship and thought that it would be interesting and wanted to read it, but them I saw that this story comes before it, so I decided to read it first. It is well written, and I think I'll enjoy it a lot ;)

awesome

Thought I'd round out your review numbers to a nice even one hundred and to query as to when you will be posting your next story. I loved this story and will be anxious to read the next. Sounds like Aragorn is in trouble again (and, sad to say, that's the way we like him)!

*thumbs up* Good story overall, though I thought the beginning part about choosing between accepting fate and exile a little OOC, abrupt and unrealistic. Nevertheless, it was an enjoyable read. :)

This, is a rudy confusing chapter. x_X

Rest of the story is good so far. *continues reading*

aw nice scene with ELrond and Estel.

I'm sorry, I guess I'm just stupid. But I don't really understand the epilouge. Is the "master" Aragorn? Or is he the rider? Or is he not in the chapter at all?

Otherwise, your last few chapters were great! It's so nice that Aragorn finally woke up. But, most importantly, was that he took the right path- TO BE KING! Who's laughing now, huh? I bet Aragorn can't wait to go to that high school reunion (can't spell) and talk to all those stinky people who ridiculed him... just because he was so smart:) STUPID PREPS! Now we'll see who has the last laugh!

Happy Holidays :)

Strider's Girl

Very good! I see you found the ending you were looking for. And you kept with the time line Tolken set up too. Christmas break has been good for you Three chapters in only two weeks. Thank you for ending our torture session. I eagerly await our next session.

I understand it now. It makes a lot more sense. Merry Christmas.