Um...I know it's been 14 years since you've written this, but...I really love this? A lot? Your style is very comfortable to read all while not being boring at all and very much leaving me wanting more. Grammar, vocabulary, and sentence structure are all fantastic! Is there a small chance you could continue..? Love to hear from you!

I like how your style matches with the movie so well. John Preston is someone I love to think about far too often. Besides, he's played by Christian Bale, that screams romance. I'm excited to see where you plan on taking this story. Consider me and official reader.

Peace.

MG*

I hope that this isn't the end...

There isn't enough romance fiction involving our favorite cleric and it whould be a real shame to let this one slide.

Please continue this, I'd like to read more.

WHAT? THAT"S IT! YOU HAVE GOT TO CONTINUE! Equilibrium is an awesome movie, and I have been searching for some good fictions. THIS IS ONE! So please, I know it's been a while...but please post another chapter. Please please please?

~GreenLeaf7~

Oh please finish this, I want to read more of this story. it is great!

Very nice. I just saw the movie and I was like 'Whoa! This is freakingly awesome' Anyway, very nice fic.

Lovely, really.
I wish you'd continue.

There is great chemistry between the characters.
Please continue this story.

I loved this movie too! I hope to read more of this story.

Amber

I like it, please continue. I'm a huge Christian Bale fan and I absolutely loved this movie when I first saw it. Which is funny, I'm not really into action movies but this one and Reign of Fire are great. Oh yean and American Psycho.. nothing like a naked crazed Christian Bale with a chain saw to get a girl interested.

WHE!

loving this!

Christian Bale ROCKS!

Its a lovely thing indeed when I see there ARE people that have seen this movie, that they like it enough to inspire them to write. Your fic is interesting, and I'd love to see where you go with it.

I was only recently introduced to the lovely phenomenon that is Equilibrium, and I fell in love with the film all but 5 minutes in. So you can only imagine how pleased I am to finally find some fiction for it. Your fiction was well-written and it seems you have a strong grasp of both the film and it's characters. Reading your work was a gift. Thanks!