I loved the story but I noticed many grammar errors or words left out completely. But overall the story was excellent. Kept me reading. Good job. Can't wait to read the sequels

Good story! I can't wait to read the sequel! I wonder what they mean by part of the Gallatin. I guess i will find out in the next story! Great story again! Keep up the great work!

i reaaly enjoyed your writting and i'm looking forward for more