Chibi-Girl:- -(Crying in the corner)- How sweet! How romantic! How heart touching! This is one of the best beyblade yaoi fanfics ever written! Must read for TyKa fans!

Kai:- -(With his infamous glare)- Are you done DRAMA QUEEN? If so, then I'm going home. -(Walks away)-.

Tala:- Umm...Hey chibi! Why are you crying in the CORNER?

Chibi-Girl:- -(Sniff- Sniff)- It's because I... I had KIDNAPPED Tyson this very morning! but then- ...

Kai:- -(Appears from now where)- WHAT DID YOU SAID!...YOU! YOU! I'LL KILL YOU!

Chibi-Girl:- -(Runs around the room)- But...But then HE RAN AWAY!
Anyways, to the actual point:-

THIS FIC WAS REALLY GREAT! I ENJOYED IT! GOOD JOB TECHNO RANMA!

Great story. I love that you did not use the girl as an purely evil antagonist and the way you solved the conflict. And I love Kai's lines, they were absolutly beatiful, especialy: He would be anything for you.

Rediscovering this story and your (and FireKali's and Glay's) works after many years heart-wrenching it amazing. I just love your writing and the deep character introspection and all the feels chapters. Although you've probably moved on from authoring this fandom, I hope you enjoyed writing these as much as I enjoyed reading them. TyKa forever!

This story is amazing, I really loved it i couldn't stop reading it.

Well, do you believe it that I re-read it over a million times!
I seriously can't stop loving this story. So lovely and so full of a truthful emotion.
Thank you for giving your love to them. That's means alot.

awww so beautiful :)

x

I'm really loving this story so far! You've really captured the characters personalities perfectly.

This is definitely going onto my favourites. I'm excited to see what happens next. :)

OMG technoranma! you are my hero :squeals: i just love your stories! especially how you portray each character's emotions I kinda suck at writing reviews so all im gonna say is AWESOME STORY3 I loved loved itw
p.s. naomi is actually the first OC character that i actually don't hate;D

Adorable I've read this a few times before, but lazily never reviewed before.

I enjoyed AU of the anime, however, usually people write the characters in a wrong way. You don't, which makes you one of my favorites. :P

Also, Naomi, being a OC, gives some "flavour" to the story, and is written in a lovely way. I don't end up hating her. :P

Anyway, very well written story. :)

0.0 OMG! i read this all through at one shot and it's awesome! i know i must be but one of the 300 people that say this and you're probably bored of reading this again but i really hope you do! : this story was amazing!

Kai struggles with his love for Tyson silently yet he's practically screaming it out loud and Tyson is so noisy yet so quite about his true feelings! it's so like them yet so unlike them! even max and Ray play an important part in making the entire story as a whole even better! and the 'go to him' at the end, i totally started melting!

this story's just amazing and totally awesome! probably your best work (that i have read so far XP) great job! :D

wow. this is seriously one of the best fics i've ever read. the character's reactions were perfect. well done

Good work.

Holy...WOW! I just sat here for two hours reading your entire story, and I gotta tell you, this is truly one of the very best fanfics I've ever found on this website. The struggles that Tyson and Kai endured to get to this ending point...so beautifully captured. Kudos, my friend, on a job well done! It's ridiculously difficult somedays to find stories that are this deep, this utterly raw when it comes to toying with a character's emotions. You do so without even having to alter the personalities of the original characters! I found myself glued to my laptop screen right from the very first chapter and I just couldn't stop until I had finished.

TechnoRanma, you rule. I haven't read a story of yours yet with even a single major flaw in it, and I soon hope to read all of your stories on this website. You truly make Tyka come to life and I would love to see more about these two. Hell, with your writing abilities, I wouldn't mind reading about any pairing you write about! XD

Have a lovely day, Techno. :)

This was one of the first KaixTakao fics I every read. It was a long time ago. Still this is my all time fav. My mom actually read it and cried. I never thought she would actually sit down and read the whole thing, but she did. This is simply the best story ever. I love this couple so much and this story captured my heart. Thank you so much for writing it for all of us! KaixTakaoLover4Ever!

read this in one sitting and it got me squealing and squealing this side of the earth at...from 10 pm to 3 am in the morning. i was crying and going 'aw' a lot too! adore it immensely! :)