This is believe- able.
Naruto would do this.
It seems cannon.

Sarah: totally true about the insults and namecalling.

Beatifully done. But, in the end words are just that... words. For one to truily believe that there'll never heal is turily a fool.

Yay! x3 Reading this again. Even if you're not answering on messe. Are you bathing or something? 0

very good

i really liked this story because...its true undenieably true.

I nearly cried!

I love this! Naruto angst so sugoi! This is going on my fav. list. Love ya.

Ja

i love it!

sorry i'm just really into drak naruto fics for some reason

i like your inner monologue stories.. its always fun to find new perspectives on characters you think you know..

.. I reviewed this before didn't I..? Oh, I dunno. _ I'm gonna get a muse for my new GaaraSaku fic. ((grabs Ino))
Awesome and amazing fic.

That was great!

That was cool. Where did the pickle and onion ice cream come from though?

Hey. I noticed that you apparently had no reviews, and since I am a fellow author I decided to try to make both me and you feel better (no reviews is a sad, sad thing). On with the review.

Your fanfic is relatively short, but I feel it conveys a frighteningly realistic message to Naruto: that indeed his dream is just that - a dream. It brings forth the angsty side of things, the side that Kishimoto Masashi does not directly bring up but implies in subtle ways. I think that it is very probable that the Kyuubi would be able to talk to him in this manner because of his possible anger at being sealed away and also the Kyuubi's observation of the futileness of human life (since he is immortal, after all...I think). Good job. I hope I'm not the only person who enjoys a good, angsty tragedy out there. :)