| Reviews for Mr Perfect |
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   woofyy chapter 18 . 1/12/2015 Nice story, good luckies with your future stories :) |
| MinimalistLinguist chapter 18 . 10/7/2012 Yay! I Loved this fanfic! |
| Ashfur54 chapter 18 . 9/10/2012 ... LOVE YOUR FANFICS...NUFFSAID! |
| ijustwanttodeletethisplx chapter 18 . 4/4/2010 I know your probably never gonna read this, but I just wanna say that all your stories are amazing, and you're really good at keeping people in character while still changing the setting. I especialy love this one, its so funny! |
| SanMiro94 chapter 18 . 8/31/2008 aha that was so frikken great ii loved iht i read it all in one nite it was too qood i have another idea for ya if yu want 2 rite anotha miroku/sango story send a email if yur interested D |
| wally4ever chapter 2 . 7/4/2007 Cute story, but it really annoyed me when you put so many author's notes in-between the chapter. Somethings are just better left unsaid, and you can incorporate what your saying in the story, without using an author's note. Some of them you even put in the middle of a sentence, and when I saw the rest of the sentence, I forgot what the first part was and had to re-read. Just have maybe one author's note at the top and/or bottom, because I'm just going to say it now: don't put author's notes in the middle. It's ANNOYING and is DISTRACTING. I also noticed that for pauses you put: ... Erm, don't. It's better to WRITE THE SILENCE. I now in mangas there are the "..." but this isn't a manga. In writing, you need to write what you mean. Describe. He paused/she paused. PS - I'm excited by how the boys think Kagome and Sango are old ladies. But they're wearing tight clothes. HA. |
| fgbbdgdffb chapter 14 . 5/14/2007 haha i actually asked my bio teacher when i read this the first time and it caused a realy long distraction in class |
| lily chapter 18 . 3/18/2007 i loved it just make it more detail in chapter 8. |
| Kaoli water goddess chapter 18 . 10/28/2006 I loved this one so much, i have it saved on a disk. It's so romantic! I love the bit with Jakotsu as the gay cab driver; never would have thoguht about that. |
| carrie chapter 18 . 8/26/2006 ah! how dare you!*slap* i was kidding!*slap again*but i really need you to do me a fav. and write a story about sango and miroku and let it be a non- ending story you know? like that movie? im sorry, im obsessed, i know but i cant help it i like miroku.. and i LIKE him... im sorry, im like the worlds biggest cartoon lover EVER! i mean, i had a crush on aladdin and peter pan at one time, so yeah, i have no life, like not like a " no life" life, i just have a stupid kill me life yeah.. okay so... i still loved it *slap* k bye! |
| Personification of Fluff chapter 1 . 7/31/2006 Wow. So I started reading this story thinking that I hadn't read it before... apparently I have. There are some typos, but I like the premise of it. Something tells me though that with the hyper-levels of Fiendish, following their conversations could be difficult at 6 am. |
| Teh Sugah Eatin Crazie chapter 18 . 6/21/2005 OMG! I totally LOVE this! I read your story "Snickers" on Yakusoku To Negai, but that was one of THE BEST stories I'd ever read! :D Hope you write more MiroSan AUs! (AUs are my fave kind of stories :D) |
| inutasha02 chapter 18 . 5/14/2005 kawaii fic! im glad someoen actually, FINALLY made a good fic that was long and good about those two! . |
| inutasha02 chapter 14 . 5/14/2005 i think i know what clavicle is...but wtf |
| atth99 chapter 18 . 3/16/2005 long time no see. its me badgurl136. its been a since i changed sn i had to get all my fav stories like i just found yours. keep up the good work. |
