| Reviews for Memorial |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2017 Wouldn't have stopped Ozantowski from trying to shoot up Chippewa Valley back in 2004. You and the others from TCDB have hated me for what, SEVENTEEN YEARS now? Why? Do you even remember? Let me tell you something: Chippewa Valley High School is less than 20 miles from my house. -Jardath |
Skylamiat chapter 1 . 9/23/2009 And when I thought it couldn't get worse... it does. The same idiots behind the 7/7/05 attacks tried again, in the same place... ...on the exact same day I first replied, July, 21, 2005. And it STILL hasn't ended. Thank the gods the MI-5 and the FBI have stepped up their game, so to speak, and stopped a few attacks. |
Skylamiat chapter 1 . 7/21/2005 Date: July 21, 2005 After 4/20/99, everyone thought it couldn't get any worse. Then came 9/11, and the copycat shootings in Germany and Minnesota. In fact, it's still getting worse. Two weeks ago, 52 people were killed in a bombing in London, which ironically ocurred in the same place as where you can find Platform 9 3/4: King's Cross Station. The war on Terrorism has officially crossed the line between Muggles and wizarding folk, Harry. |
Baranth chapter 1 . 12/13/2003 12/13/03 - A memorial from a Draconissean 43 months ago, two Terran human children came up with a stupid way to celebrate Hitler's 110th birthday. That idea was Columbine. I've looked at the tradegy at every possible angle, and have came to this conclusion: Terran humans are too careless with their lives. Now, as a member of a species that has a average lifespan of over 5.3 million years, I know how precious life is. I have fathered over 1,0 children, and have had 13 of them killed in senseless violence. I feel that hate groups have corrupted Earth too much. I am offering my condolences not only for Columbine, but for 9/11, for Columbia, for the War on Terrorism, and for all of the senseless acts of violence I've heard about over the 313 years I've been on Earth. I used to think that only adults could be this cruel. Now I realize that cruelty knows no age limits. |
Emily Aine Capulet chapter 1 . 10/22/2002 Wow. That story had an awesome message, and a very inspiring plot. I hope that someone will see that who lives near Comlumbine and decided to leave their weapons at a memorial. As usual, great story! |
A LA QUEEN ISABEL chapter 1 . 9/3/2002 Wow, this was really good... really sad though. Rachel's poem was really well written and really moving- I've read some of ur other poetry, and your definately an awesome poet. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2002 This is the most amazing school shooting story I have ever read not to mention the best animorphs ff. You are a truely talented writer and the messages within this ff were amazing. I really enjoyed reading it! |
flying chapter 1 . 3/24/2002 Beautiful. That's the only was too describe it |
Vouivre chapter 1 . 9/2/2001 ::sob:: *sniff* Wahhhhhhhhhhhh! So, so touching! Boohoo! I loved it! I know some might consider it sick, but why? Thats what life is, sick. The fact that these things really happen is the sickest of all. Why do we kill eachother? Why do destroy the Earth? It is everyones fault. Yours, mine, anyone who doesn't DO something about it is at fault. This is turing into a lesson, so one more thing- Send this to EVERY fanfic site you can! To anyone and everyone! Even your teacher I don't care, just GET IT INTO THE WORLD! |
Gost cat chapter 1 . 8/30/2001 That was realy good. Never stop writing. I cryed and my mom looked at me funny because I don't ever cry. I don't think I have every realy heard about the Columbine shooting, but this fic. has inspired me to find out more about it. I hope one day all humans can live up to Rachels note. |
tima chapter 1 . 5/20/2001 it is beautiful and it is so very very real the people who read this story will not only cry but the message will be forever imprinted in their hearts i hope that the is never another columbine again i hope that the people who read this story will take a minute to just think about it and because of it fill their hearts with hope and love! |
Fire n Ice chapter 1 . 4/28/2001 beautifully written. and so true. |
Evilcatgirl chapter 1 . 4/20/2001 I read this story. It is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. You ended it perfectly. You are right about the game of passing the blame along. - Calypso J. Taylor |
Agent-Spooky chapter 1 . 4/16/2001 I really liked it. |
Sabrina Myst chapter 1 . 3/10/2001 Yes, I'm reviewing again. Because this fic was the best one I know that deals with school shootings, and... you all know what happened at Santana High. I would just like to say that you're wrong, you have enormous writing talent, and that the first time I read this I almost cried. Despite the sappiness, this story has a real meaning to it, and that's what makes it linger in my mind, and why I came back to this story after another shooting. I love this story, from the beginning to the end, from Tobias's poem to Rachel's message to the dedication at the end. Thank you for writing this, Ruby. It's a gift to us all. |