Great characters and really interesting beginning. Thank you!

On so lovely, as usual! Mahalo, Leilani

:sigh: I love this story :) Makes me sad it's over :')

Nice story! Haldir swoooon

A delightful story! Has everything to keep one glued to the page! Thank you! !

Absolutly loved this story! totally just read all of it in one night x)

Loved!

She wasn't a virgin? that ruined everything for me.

Oh my gosh don't I fell stupid now ? Of course it's about Tari , the mouse, mouse! Like in the name of the story haha :p sorry for being stupid ;)

Or is the Oc that this story will center on Tari? I assumed it was about aranel since it was her the story centred around from start but now it center a lot around Tari.. :S

Is this gonna be a fic where the OCs sister is in the center of attention and soooo much better and a pretty little princess type ? I hate when the OCs have little sisters that take all the attention and appear to be perfect where the OC has all the flaws .. And also is this going to be some kind of love triangle where the sisters compete for haldir and the OC just make a fool of herself practically ? Cause I can't stand that :p I like your writing style and all and I don't mean to hate on your story or anything I just want/need to know before I continue reading :)

Wonderful story.. I loved it! :D

I thought Tari means Queen in Quenya? Queen in Sindarin is Ris or Bereth or something. Oh, and I can't find mouse in Quenya or Sindarin...so I guess acording to fanfiction, Tari is mouse in Sindarin. Great job! I'm loving the story so far, keep up the great work :D

Amazing!

Just wanted to say that I think this story is fantastic! It deserves way more reviews then it has, and I'm glad to have read it. Great job!