update soon!please!it's so good!poor Will please write more!

This is really good! I can't wait for more! I don't usually find any good POTC stories, but this is a rather good one. Update! Update! Update! :D

please update! savvy *puppyeyes*

YOU! YOU PERSON! GIVE ME...US, MORE GIVE VIEWERS MORE! UPDATE NOW!...well I'm very nice aren't I? Hehehe I love this story! and if you don't update I'll kill you! *does something bad...* See I just killed you,...heh,no I kid.

Well anyway keep up the god work!_ _...okay I'll stop now... sorry.

hi
i just strtd reading ur story but in the flash back in chapter 3 you left out some things:
erm... firstly Jack patted Will on the hand with the sword not the head.
will says i make a habit of avoiding familiarity(i think thats how u spell it) with pirates.
before will says you threatened miss swan Jack says "do you this wise boy, crossing blades with a pirate?"
and thats about it
no crtisism just help
keep updating
krissie

hey great story. is there going to be slash or just friendly fluff? puhlease continue! and if you still need a beta i'd be more than happy to if you could tell me what to do.

i like it. keep going! update soon!

I love PotC but there was one thing that sucked about it. Will ending up with irksome Elizabeth? Puhlease, could the shounen-ai be any more obvious between Jack and Will? Well now that's out of the way. Please update, cos this fic kicks serious arse! *Floats away on Throne of evil*

I'm enjoying this immensely. Please do continue.

love it love it love it. bring on the JW!

Good story! Interesting idea and all. Nice imagery, definately. Good use of emotive language too.

Write more!

_~

DreamWeaver

yay! finally! update soon, very soon

-bows- You're great! You protray Jack and Will well. -sighs- If only I could meet Jack. -daydreams then gets slapped by pet monkey- I'll read your story all day and everyday please update soon, but I too know what it's like about school and business. -gives the standing O and waits for another chapter-

:( not another cliff-hanger! :P A few paragraph spacing errors I noticed, a littel distracting. Other than that, keep 'em coming :) Can't wait (but I will have to) for the next part! :)

I really love the idea, it's very interesting. I can't wait to see what will happen next! Poor Will! I feel so bad for him, he's always getting mixed up with curses! lol I'm addicted to this! I NEED to know what will happen next. I really like the style, even if I don't normally like mysteries. I'm curious as to what the trap is. I didn't get the whole thing with Barbossa(sp?) I mean is he just suppose to get Will on his boat and give him that vial of liqiud? What IS the vials' contents. Can Jack save him? Does Elizabeth leave Jack's rum alone? Will Jack and Will hook up? Will they get out of all this trouble unscathed? What happened to Will's arm? Questions questions, I'm just full of questions! I LOVE your story! It's totally awesome! You have a wonderful fantastic plot line. PLEASE pretty please update soon! I NEED to find out what they'll do! *waves* Later yo, Icy