| Reviews for Crimson Teardrops |
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Guest chapter 2 . 12/25/2019 What did he do |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2019 Owww |
Lucyole chapter 5 . 10/27/2014 please write again that would be nice, your story is good very interesting sad and exciting i like it so far please write further. *cookies for you* |
Sunshine Fia chapter 5 . 3/13/2007 Whaa! Oh please! You have to finish this story, and i know it's been over three years...but it's such a great story! I luv it! |
Pokahydee - Nekoyasha chapter 5 . 1/2/2006 Hello there I really enjoyed this story, it's very original, in my opinion. Usagi seems to be in character very well, Yohji might not have been quite flirty enough (though he can't see her so that could explain why). Anyway, I'd just suggest to get a beta-reader for this story, there's a sprinkling of spelling and grammar errors that a beta would pick up on a quick read-through. I also saw 'their' used incorrectly in one chapter (it was supposed to be 'they're') so I would watch out for that in the future. All in all, I think this story is actually very good (even if the chapters seem a tad short to me; ). I was disappointed to see that there was no more XD I hope you choose to continue this story, it's good Is Schu-schu gonna make an appearance? I love Shuldich XD |
jam chapter 5 . 7/12/2005 This is one of the most interesting sm fics that i have read so far. i know that it has been awhile, but are you going to consider continuing it? |
Kitsune chapter 5 . 6/6/2005 Please update this fic! I really want to read another chpapter! This is really, really good. |
GoldenStar chapter 5 . 3/26/2005 OH MY GOD! You just HAVE to update ASAP! Please have Ken or Yohji to be with Usagi! Sure Aya and Omi are nice and all, but those two are what i think Usagi can get along with. But than again, Aya was something like Mamoru so that could help her...oohh I don't know! SO what did happen to USagi? Did she kill herself? At first I had thought Mamoru had taken a beer too many and was out of control and had killed her in her sleep when I had read that he had been drinking. Was the other thing that USagi killed herself was because she knew that Mamoru had done it with Rei? (Was that what Mamoru meant by the first time?) Gosh I am popping with questions. Anyway, i really hope that you continue because I am dying to know what lead USagi to her death. Great story! - GoldenStar P.S. - Bad Usagi! GOing into the boys locker room, with out getting any pictures too! *Nah, just kiddin' that ain't me* -_~ |
Phoenix Bakura chapter 5 . 3/2/2005 Sugoi! I wanna read the next chapter! |
DreamCaster chapter 5 . 1/31/2005 Oh.. I really want to know what setsuna going to tell her and what happen after that.. I really want to know...please update it.. it almost a year already... |
lil-saturn-goddess chapter 5 . 11/10/2004 wow u must continue this story it's so good.. |
Flame Ivy Moon chapter 5 . 10/11/2004 I love it please up date asap! |
Flame Ivy Moon chapter 5 . 10/11/2004 I love it please up date asap! |
Flame Ivy Moon chapter 5 . 10/11/2004 I love it please up date asap! |
Flame Ivy Moon chapter 5 . 10/11/2004 I love it please up date asap! |