I can’t believe I never read this story until today. I devoured it in less than an hour. My only “critique” is that the ending seemed a bit rushed... I wished to see more of their relationship back in Vegas. But maybe that was just me wishing the story was longer, because I hated to see it end! I enjoyed it so damn much!

I know it’s asking a lot, but would you ever consider writinf GSR stories again?

This story was very beautiful. I really loved it!

just found this story.

only took two nights to read.

very good. really enjoyed it.

Just found your story and read it..you did a great job...the ending was perfect...

I love this story. I love it so much that I printed it (took like sixteen pages, size 10 font lines barely spaced no margins). There is really only one thing that bothers me, and it gets me every single time I read the story.

Sixth paragraph down, last line

"they’d just silently accepted that the other one was there"

should be "they'd each just silently accepted that the other one was there"

With only "they'd" they were both accepting one fact, and the other 'one' cannot be specified. Since it is seperate from the 'they'd' it couldn't mean that (this feels like a grammar logic puzzle). They each modifies the 'they'd' so that the rest of the line works in the singular.

I know that it's SUPER picky, but I just can't handle it any more. I deliberated for three chapters as to whether I should bother you about it. I just couldn't let it go.

Have a fantastic day!

-Lady A

Really Good Story

Simply beautiful.

I love reading your fics, they are enchanting.

Keep up the good work!

aww that was an excellent story!

Amazing story... very well written... bravo! I seriously look forward to more of your work.

I really like how you've handled their insecurities and fears here. Their emotions are very real. They've run such a roller coaster of emotion in this story-it's been a heck of a ride. I'd like to say I enjoyed how you ended the story. But ff.n won't let me view chapter 16. Evil tyrants! :/

YAY for the final installment of this story! Loved it!

eternally grateful if you would do a sequel... this story is truly beautiful... i want to know about children, and work and everything else...

you made this story come alive ;)

thank you...

aw that's such a sweet ending! i'm glad i stuck on for this!

I like this story. It's like knock knock. Who's there? Fate.

Sara is sooper smartt. Sorry i had to do that. That Chapter was funny and yet deep.