Phooey! Why is it that when I find really good fanfictions, 65% of them are never finished! DAMMIT! I know it probably won't do me any good to beg, but... PLEASE! I'm begging you to PLEASE finish this frikin' awesome piece of fiction, it just kills me when there not finished! PLEASE!

well i up to chapter 5 and i love the story and i shall continue to read it

I have to say, I have been very bad for not reviewing the rest of your chapters.

I love your fic. Love it. I am not exaggerating - it has everything that makes it appealing to me - conflict, the Duke, Marduks, Romance, the Duke, Enmy, Rock's past, the Duke, good detailing, length, the Duke.

Swear all you want. Most of us don't care. Heck, I'm doing an upcoming fic with lots of juicy sex and soft S&M!

I am short on computer time, and I haven't had as much time as I would like to review. Again, I am truely sorry, for you deserve reviews for this wonder piece of writing.

Perhaps you should try changing the story summary and put a notice when you have updated.

Please don't stop writing!

Asperger's Syndrome is a high functioning form of autism.

People who have this form of autism often have trouble socially, and are often known to have strange ideas about the world around them. They can also be quite violent...under certain circumstances.

They are extremely smart and often also suffer from hyperlexia...if you can call it suffering.

They are skilled in work having to do with numbers and mechanics, but seeing that the ailment is rare and 95% of the people who have it are male, that shows why.

People with this syndrome are often pensive and can also end up with Bipolar syndrome, or even mild psychosis in extreme cases.

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There's my explanation on AS. It may have been under autism in your book...*sweatdrop* Yay! Another great chapter! Vuong is mad again...last time it had to do with wrongfully using her character...this time...

Oh...Lemons! This subject matter devides the group, instantly. Let me quote my fellow AWF members:

"Tell her to give Duke Red a lemony part! Please? Ayana, are you listening? Stupid...well, I have work to do...tell her!"-Vuong

"Gore, not stupid fruits. Man, girls are so dumb..."-Rudin

"I like limes."-Teri-Lyn

There you have it. Opinions of AWF. This story keeps getting better! *squeal* Poor Rock...I know how he feels...my daddy doesn't love me anymore! *smug look* I wonder why, though? Hmm. Something to think about.

*Shudders at thought of a lemon containg Duke Red*

I don't think I can handle porn-star Duke Red... stupid Vuong.

Rock's Mental Diagnosis: Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder

Sanguine's Mental Diagnosis: Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder

Duke Red's Mental Diagnosis: Asperger's Syndrome

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I love figuring out what's wrong with character's heads...It's just too fun. Keep writing, you're story is really good, even if there are hardly any reviews. After all, not very many people write Metropolis fanfiction.

AWF

This is cool! I like it. Unfortunately, not very many authors here update. (profane string) #$%W$%#W#$% $W$% $#% $#!(End of profane string) What am I talking about? I hardly update! (Profane string)$%&%*#%$%&#&&$%*$*$%! (End profane string)I think Marduk was accidentally spelt 'Malduk' so much is because R sometimes sounds like L in japanese.

Sanguine is quite easygoing...she makes for an interesting character. An easygoing character is always nice.

Oh, and while I'm here...

EVERYONE WHO WRITES IN THIS ARCHIVE MUST UPDATE!

Thankerts,

Ayana, Rudin, Vuong, and Teri-Lyn

Great fic and nice chapter. Sanquine seems like a really bitch to me though. In the next chapter you should have rock get even with her and not rejoin the marduks. And then have him start causing trouble for Sanquine. That would be cool!

This is nice. I like your style. Not sure why other people haven't reviewed this yet, it's very good...-_-() It's got a nice feel to it, and I like your choice of words. Keep writing.