The first duel was funnier. It was more cheating and insults thrown about

LOL "So far in the negatives its not even funny" but it IS funny. This is kind of extreme but does show how OP fanmade cards get

As a humourous peice of what-not-to-do, its brilliant. It keeps the funny element, while not having that rigid structure that other websites have that don't let you do shit without a permit or some other bollocks.

This story's too realistic to be a parody. There's not enough mispelled words and there weren't any dead baby jokes. Plus everybody knows that super-awesome specialist rarest card ever is Kuriboh. That cuddly little fur-ball monster can take any blow. Anywayz, enough rambling, great story and chapter.

Celebi? MTISFITIGTDL (Man,this is so funny I think I'm going to die laughing)

BWUHAHAHAHHAHAHH!1

UPDATE SOON!

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i wanna make a guest apperance:

Ozzy

Cards: Scapegoat, Hidden Goat, Dragon Goat, God Goat,Stupid Goat and loads of cards made up weirdly with weirdly weird stuff in them _

GOATS 4EVER!

thank you for your time.

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I told you I would read more! Great job. Lavos! Phht. You had me whistling Frog's theme about halfway through the chapter. Cheers for Chrono Trigger! Heh. Well, I'll say this... In your fic, you act just like... well... yourself. (To the extent of what I've seen on YIM, anyway. _; ) This chapter was funny, as were all the others. I always enjoy reading your brand of lunacy. The only thing I noticed is that you may have forgotten to run a spell check this chapter, but it's a small thing. It's just a couple of words. Anyway, awesome work, as usual. You can expect reviews from me on the rest, of course.

-Ri

HAHAHAHHA, funyness!

Option D: Normal girl suddenly developed into... the Terminator chick? oO There was an interesting touch. _ I was waiting for the author insertion; and technically, you have two of them, you sneaky man, you! XP Of course, you know by now I'm darned used to The Helldragon's antics. *Drops Levi in front of him.* Occupy yourself for awhile, HD. Seriously, great chapter. The killing of the Mary-Sue! I think you knew I'd like that...

-Ri

AGH! MY EYES! Too funny, but just not right... _;; I can't believe you poisoned your fingers to write that. XP Seriously, funny. I don't know what else to say, because, as usual, you killed my brain.

Sage: You don't need HD to do that for you...

-Ri

Yes, Magma Dragoon should be here! What on earth are you thinking, having Duffman, but not Dragoon? *Shakes head.* For shame. *Shudders.* Erk... I guess I'm going to have to suffer through the slash next chapter. -_-; Oh, well. I'm sure you'll make it admirable funny, knowing you.

Sage: Watch it, Ri. You don't want another brain-hemorrhage

Seto: *With extreme sarcasm.* Wouldn’t that be a tragedy?

-Ri

PS: Do you lack the berry?

-Ri

There was gore, but where was the flying entrails, or the part where she tries to strangle him with her exposed intestines? (lol... yes, I saw that on an anime once.) Well, funny as usual... but one thing; at the end, you mentioned the slash being for the all the fangirls... This fangirl hates slash! XP See? We're not all the same... (But I think you know I'm a "little differant." ) Nice job, anyway... now onward! *points ahead- to the next chapter she must read.*

Sage: You really have no life, don't you?

Seto: That's like asking if the sky is blue...

_;;

-Ri

You know what? All this story needs is the Pan-Galactic Gargle Blaster to be perfect. Nice job, of course. I especially liked the “Frog Squash.” There’s just one problem now… I can’t stop whistling Frog’s theme!

Seto: And she’s driving me crazy.

Sage: Everything drives you crazy.

Seto: And your point is?

*Sweatdrop* I’d better go before a battle breaks out here…

Okay, seeing Seto acting like Joey was extremely freaky. And funny. That was generally pointless and amusing; as it should be. Not so nicely nicely done.

Seto: This is ridiculous. I would never sell out for a billion dollars; That’s chump change for me!

Sage: *Clamps hand of Seto’s mouth and drags him away.*

Er… will they ever behave? *Sweatdrop*

-Ri