Dark is so casual about this! you did this in true Dark style! lol wonderful

"I actually was into DNAngel before the anime was fansubbed, much less licensed and released."

...This sounds like such a hipster-ish thing to say XD

I loved thisssss

I love your writing style. The voice is great!

And a humerous story. Although I tend toward stories in which Dark is the dominant one, I like this one. ;)

Haha, that was really good, cute and definitely hot!

But, Krad has golden eyes, not blue.

hey dis was so great keep going!

Dark/Krad...best couple EVER there both hott (Go ahead, rip my head off for loving the bad guy, but hey...I have a thing were bad guys just get to me, but do not worry, I love Dark as well) Loved the story, good job

I doubt being asleep would stop him. I love how Satoshi didn't care that much, Daisuke tried to pretend nothing was happening, and Krad was proud. Especially that last one. It makes me laugh. XP XD XXD

He he, Great story! I want to add it to my Fav... but I already put too much... just telling you how much i LOVE IT!

woh...that is good...haha Daisuke, Dark saw you

yaoi lemon - yay - but 1 thing, chan is used for the females .. mostly, kun is mostly used for males - and san wouldf be used for a formal use such as someone older like a teacher or older sister, ect. so daisuke would call dark-san

oh mi goshie ! its so hott ! i like your writing style. _

its wiz not with.

I loved this, great job! - *favefaveFAVE*

LOVED it!

Would you mind re-writing that from Daisuke's point of view?