I'm very curious what will Shinzon do now. He will let his animal insticts to him or he will be try to help her. Keep the great work and update soon. ;P DF

Very interesting story. You seem to be off to a good start. I will be very interested in seeing where this story goes. I would also like to make a suggestion. While your vocabulary and story vision are very good, there are some problems with syntax and sentence structure which cause the story to not read as smoothly as it could. If you have a beta, have them check over it with you. If you need an example of what I mean, please feel free to e-mail me. Please do keep writing, I always love reading about such sexy villians as Shinzon.

Sincerely, The Nubian Queen

fantastic story so far, please continue,i can't wait to read more about shinzon.

Well, being, er . . violated by a reman is NO pretty thought, just. . ew! but i do like the character you have set up. She appears to be one kind of wanton, but within her thoughts we find out she is possibly a victim, very interesting. Your writing itself is very good too, nice descriptions and vocabulary.

great beginning.i really really like your update soon