very well-written! great job

So I assume this is a dead fic? it's good though.

Other than Belduine... I really liked this chapter.

The introduction of the new character was too abrupt and haphazard.

You. Are. An. Amazing. Writer. Hey? This is an amazing story, you know that? I read the entire thing in five hours. _With chocolate and milkshakes to keep me going). XP

Once I finish this review I will allow my eyeballs to melt out of my head.

So, I'll start with the beginning. None of your characters are out of personality, which is amazing because you've been writing this for so long! You OC's are awesome, and so unique! There's plenty of every character, and there's no fogotten aspects like Yuki/Kyo hate. The plot is amazing, and it doesn't involve an overused love decagon like many other stories have.

Basically, what I'm saying, is that this story is so amazing it has motivated me to write a review. Please update soon and keep writing!

Love,

~ come-by-chance

I figure leaving my mark on this story's fourth birthday is appropriate on some level.

I've been following Evermore since the beginning (years before I broke down and got a screenname on and it's been an interesting read. But it's been close to two and a half years since it's been touched.

The purpose of a review is (in theory) to comment on a chapter. I feel it would be unfair to comment in depth on what you yourself have deemed "not edited and not complete." That said, I like what I've been reading thus far.

Please don't let this story die.

Best of luck.

hi cool story!

Aw... No more to this chapter?

I had a dream that this story was finished... very strange. But man, was it a good dream. _

Anyways, awesome story. One of the few good FB fics out there. I do hope it comes off suspension soon.

This is so good! please update soon, 'kay!

SERINITY'S ANGEL _~

This story is great! I hope you get time to update this soon, I can hardly wait to read what happens next.

Everyone seems to be IC and I love your OC, he seems very real and human. I think I'll go read your side story now, I'm wondering where that guy came from.

wah why arent you contiuing it?

AH KEEP WRITING TEH STORY I ISH ADDICTED ON IT!

In all of Furuba ficdom, I have one fic that I'm following religiously.

ONE.

So why oh WHY has it been a year since it was updated?

I love ur story so far but it'd be cool if u'd update it soon cuz i wanna know what i'll happen next. so please update soon.

Realizing the current hiatus (?) you have on this fic, I have to say that (after having spent my entire weekend and much of last Monday's evening glued to a word-processing document with all the chapters copied into it) that you really have created something wonderful here. It has a great range of views, and some of the best writting I've seen. There aren't very many well-written Furuba fics out there, and this one was an absolute pleasure to read. ( My sister got all annoyed at me when I started printing pages out when I had to get off the computer. *laugh*) I hope that maybe you will feel like updating soon-I know it's not a pleasure to write when you aren't inspired to, but please don't abandon this fic. (Honestly, you have it at a point where you can just finish writing it without much worry about the manga developments... Except maybe CH. 97... *sweatdrop*)

Anyway, thank you for giving us what you have till now. It was GREAT!