Yay, I think this fandom need more slash.

I was thinking about your fic for a while, and I realized something. Actually, I don't think it's that Finny doesn't see the world in black and white; he does. It's just his own personal designations of the two that doesn't come close to matching anyone else's. Just thought I 'd add that. Liked your fic anyway.

Okay, this is so freakin' GOOD! I love it, love it, love it. The dialogue si really in character, I can see Finny saying it. Great work! Why can't there be more Gene/Finny?

I wonder what would happen if my English teacher saw this; puts a whole new spin on things. Glad to see that there is a slash story about Gene and Finny in existence though, and very well written. I must say this "interpretation" makes, to me, the story all the more depressing; every chapter made me want to sigh...or cry. I hope more is coming in the future, even if they aren't A Separate Peace.

I think you're the only A Separate Peace slash author in existence, and for that, I must applaud you. For seeing such an obvious slash couple is easy, but to go the extra distance and write such amazing work - which, strangely enough, is very close to the style the book's written in - is beyond excellence. I hope to see more from you on the tragically wonderful Gene/Phineas.

wait...that's not it is it? right? there's gonna be more...RIGHT? PLEASE? [sniffles]