| Reviews for Focus |
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  Guest chapter 9 . 1/29/2015 So lovely! You have a very unique voice! |
| anonymous chapter 9 . 9/1/2013 very sweet story! |
 The matryoshka doll chapter 1 . 12/22/2012 This is an excalent story. I simply adore it |
| Ginger-Snapp chapter 9 . 1/8/2011 One of the very few inter book stories I actually enjoyed. You handled everyone quite well, and your version of the kids are the only ones I've been able to stand so far. I just have one thing: you ARE aware that the name 'Doris Crockford' came from Harry Potter, correct? Ginger. |
| Luna12 chapter 1 . 12/22/2010 Great chapter. Action, suspense, fluff and great in-character descriptions! |
| Hedonia chapter 6 . 8/31/2010 Whoa, Numair REALLY DOES owe Rain. |
| Reader chapter 9 . 4/26/2010 I love how Volney talks, mmph hmph! |
| Lady Knight 1994 chapter 3 . 7/21/2009 Something happened with my computer and it submitted my other reveiw before I'd finished. As I was saying before my evil computer cut me off... Ouna's getting rich, Perin's getting attacked. All is good. V. funny. And poor, poor 'Mair. Abused, mistreated and a source of income. Couldn't stop laughing. Lady Knight 1994 |
| Lady Knight 1994 chapter 3 . 7/21/2009 Ouna is getting rich off of our poor mage's discomfort. |
| athemyst chapter 1 . 12/8/2008 Love how you combine humour with suspense, and angst. Keep on writing! |
| Tsuki No Shuurai chapter 1 . 5/16/2008 hehe...very well done. |
| Inkbl0t chapter 7 . 3/17/2008 ...Mph. Gnhe. I swear to GOD, this has just become my most favorite DN fanfic there will ever be. :sighs in reverence: (Do you know, I've actually been wringing my hair-my HAIR-as I've read this? It's terrible, I tell you, terrible.) |
| Fishy Rainboots chapter 8 . 2/17/2008 Great job! I am really enjoying it so far. |
| Wotcher Wolvie chapter 6 . 6/26/2006 Good! |
| Somebody chapter 9 . 3/10/2006 Oh wasn't that sweet? Loved it! I really liked how you portrayed Volney Rain. Somebody |
