Reviews for Foolish |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i really liked this story. you mentioned that you were going to do a sequel, but looking through your list, i couldn't find it. could you let me know the name if it, if you did? i would really appreciate it! this is the first story of yours that i've read, but you are a really good writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT! THATS IT ARE YOU KIDDING! AH IM GOING CRAZY OMG OMG OMG! LOVE ~TBD~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oof. GINNY. Wow, we're getting a lot of problems. w00t w00t. ~'Nami |
![]() ![]() ![]() it would be great if u made another d&h fic. hmm. wats happened to ginny? she's not pregnant is she? can't remember anyway, great chapter. maybe u could continue with something about harry and remus doing...something. ah i wish i could help u out lol ps: did u read the half-blood prince yet? u probably did. and it's awesome i just finished reading it a few days ago. pps: maybe u could incorporate something in from the hbp. i don't know. don't listen to me my ideas are boring |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just checked to see if u updated and i was like "YES!" because u did. great chapter! (PS 6th line up from bottom i think u meant to put 'danger' but it says 'dance') |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. How sad. ~'Nami |
![]() ![]() ![]() Y0UR ST0RY FUCKiNG R0CKS ! [dont mind the language] 0MiG0SH ! UPDATE ASAP PLEASE ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey blacksoul i love your style it's great. u really get the characters personalities really well. keep up the great work! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! It has been so long since I've read this story! From the looks of it, it's been awhile since you've updated it as well. Oh. I have grown interested in it again. Yay. ~'Nami |
![]() ![]() ![]() Though this story has short chapters, it doesn't matter because each chapter means a lot than people who write long chapters without a meaning in it. This story chills me and it has suspense. Keep going |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so deep shit... i like it get up the great work |
![]() ![]() hmp. i like it. an interesting writing style but it works well. id like to see how you develope the story. good onya your not a bad writer. |
![]() ![]() Voldemort is here? Well, that certainly adds more tension to this fic. Cutie Danica! I hope her Daddy comes to rescue her as soon as possible. Thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a great story, very entertaining, I don't ever really feel like I know what is coming up next, which makes it all even better! hope to see more soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() don't worry. u still have many loyal fans..right? don't worry about that critic |