I thought the plot and twists are quite good.. I also liked the references to the original series with the reference to steve the monster. I also thought the characters were true to their original persona's which is great as all the other fanfictions i have read are just the same lovey dovey PPG X RRB yuck.

I do think the long text walls could have been shortened as they seemed like a chore to get through but i can see why they were there. Other than that. Great story. 10/10

Nice chapter, but the boys missed some obvious strategies when fighting these four monsters, grabbing the diamond like one and tossing it into the acid creature, or spitting cold water at the creatures overheated armor might have caused it to crack for the sudden contraction.

Honest is hard to like the STUPID AND GULLIBLE people of Townsville.

I wonder who will save the city if both boy and girls are punished...

Hahaha, I love that they forgot about the smiths...

Well, lets see how well this goes.

Wow, Jojo told the truth? I guess that since he doesn’t hate the boys but hates the girls...

Well, the girls just crossed the line... they aren’t heroes anymore...

Well, will Mojo lie or say the truth?

Well, now the girls are just being dumb, but then, they are six...

Honest, those girls have no real proof... and this is wrong, you cant' arrest people just based on what someone say, you need real evidence.

This won't end well...

Well, no wonder the girls are only six...

Well, I guess the boys will have to train hard again...

Well, the war has just started...