no!*screams and cries*

cool nice second chappie

autumn needs a good part in this after al my name is autumn lol jk its a pretty good beging

This was really good, and I wish you could continue it. If you could, please tell me who is continuing it so that I can read the rest of it.

this is funny!

Hey, since its summer, do you think you can write some more I really like this story and it'd be great if you continued! _

Ack! (falls over with the gravity) Just when I was getting into it, too! That sucks... (pouts for a moment) Oh well. Anyway, this is just a review on what you've done on the story. I liked how you portrayed the characters, though I think the little sister should have been a lil' bit annoying at some points, like maybe learning to fly and going over to their training spot to pop in. Then Angel could get ticked and Piccolo would be amused, and Gohan would be his lil' confused self. Anyway, though, you wrote a good start, it's too bad you're not continuing.

Please keep writing. I liked how you made fun of the really corny stuff in DBZ. Hope to see chapter three soon.

hahahahhahahahahahahha! loved it! and i think piccolo is one of the coolest characters in dragonballz! keep writing!

i loved it ! it was halarious!

This is gettin good, please hurry and write more!_

This is really good! I can't wait for the next part! Oh, and what's happening with Angel's sister?

O! I like this! Please continue it! hehe I can picture King Kai laughing at something like that! hehe Please get more out soon!

I THINK STORY WAS GREAT COME WITH MORE FAST !

This is starting to get VERY interesting! Get the next chapter up soon! I just love these kind of stories!