Think you wrote Alex very well. She's a hard one to pin down, so I understand why it'd be hard to write it up. Excellent job though, should write more AO pairings.

aww...

i havent seen the episode and if i have i cannot remember it, but this was well written, and i think the way you wrote alex seemed fine as i could imagine her guilt being something like that if there was a follow up of the episode.

you did good :D

I know it's been a year and a half, but what the hell, I'll say it anyway: you got Alex just fine. I do wish you'd write more!

Great story-Write more slash with Olivia & Alex,
They would be great together! Iam a hopeless
romantic-what can I say.

Again, I love this fic. The story fits perfectly- I can see it happening right after the episode. Please continue to write such interesting stories please.

Hi! _ *claps* Well, you wanted a review, and this one's mine- it was great! _ I thought both women were in character, and the story had good grammar and content. I job well done!

Very good. I think you do Alex quite well actually...Olivia is more open with her emotions, whereas Alex is less open. The emotions are still there, of course, but she reigns them in.

So, you did a wonderful job _

Oh, wow, again with the gorgeous. And the characters, too! I just adore the hold you have on them. Loving this. Loving this a lot.

very nice story. mature portrayl of a mature and caring relationship. alex is my favorite character, too, and i am so unhappy they are killing her off.

I love this fan fic more and more each time I read it. I love the way you wrote Alex.. and her eyes "slowly growing steely" again. They are kind of like coffee and tea.. *goes off on weird metaphorical tangent* Anyway, I 3 this story _

This is a beautiful story. I'm so glad to see more people jumping on the A/O bandwagon, and if half of those stories were like this, I'd be a very happy woman. :)

As for your characterization, I think it *is* good-Alex is a very shadowy character in some ways. We see very little of her outside of the office, whereas with Olivia, we see her all over the place.

You could have gone so much farther in that story! LOL. I really enjoyed it tho.

I love this story more and more each time I read it.. I love the way you wrote Alex.. _ Wonderful. Write more, or I shall sic the whole force on you.. or maybe that's not a threat? *giggle* Digressing.. write more!

Alex is my favourite character followed by Olivia. keep writing there aren't enough Alex stories .

hi, this is really a good fic. There arent enough Alexfics in my view, so please, write more!

x

Jamie