Perfect!
You have such a beautiful writing style, and this fic was so sad yet so well-written!
It was PERFECT.

Life like, and your characters are amazing. I wanted a happy ending... But I think that was great just the way it was even if it rips at my heart!

Amazing job, absolutely fabulous

That was good. Any chance of a sequel?

Wow, I really enjoyed this fic. Great story and well written!

I'm conflicted with this. By the time I reached the end, I wanted a sequel or some sort of conclusion. But thinking it over, I realized that it's perfect the way it is.

Wonderfully done. Sad but perfect.

Oh come on! Do a sequel, PLEASE? The ending is so sad...and they need to kiss at least ONCE right? ;-;

Aw. I wish they'd gotten together in this one. That was such a good fic.

Gah complette sob story! cries, that was just... oh my... Dont get me wrong, I loved it! just sad, but kool, ya know?

Oh. ;.; This was too cute for words. I mean, seriously probably the most adorable Evietro I've ever come across. The scene in front of the class rocked hard. It was utterly precious, and you can picture the scene so easily in your head. Gold, pure gold.
The ending saddened me though. I really did want them to get together and for Evan to kiss his tickly spot. That reminds me, the memory of them spooning - GAH. SO CUTE. *spontaneous combustion* Anyway, yeah... I think I was hit the most by Pietro throwing the pencil at him. Just hits me right there, man.
So all in all, a great fic that's going on my Favorites list. Yay!

extremely good it ended kinda sad and i feel bad for both evan and pietro. i wish it ended on a better note but it still was a great story

I Like this, more soon please

Catgirl: It...Evan...Pietro...*breaks down into tears* I *sob* like *sob* sap...*continues crying*

LLana: Erm...well, she liked the story and she was really sad about the ending. She wanted them to get together in the end. In fact so did I. We both like sappy unrealistic romantic fluffy goodness. Keep Writing (with hopefully happier endings) _

~Catgirl and her muse LLana~

Whoah. That was really deep and depressing. But it was awesomely written and with life-like character reactions, and life is often deep and depressing also. But I loved it! You're a genius! I'd beg you to write more if this chapter didn't say fin at the bottem. I'm still wondering about that black lock of hair on Pietro's head. What's with that? Oh well. Since Evan never found out about it, we readers didn't either, and it adds to the vibe at the ending that so many things were just left unresolved. Keep writing, your stories make me think and I like feeling smart!

kukume~

aww it ended so sad my favorite kind beautiful story

I liked this chapter alot very good