Reviews for Facetious Beginning
ThePurplePeacock chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Love love love. One of my all time favorite fanfics. If only you'd write more Jin/Touya fics. ;-;
Sirius-Black-is-not-dead chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Completely cute, love the bit of Touya being Jin's "light"- I think this fic did a great job expressing and detailing those bits that make Jin/Touya click.
snake and crane chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
you portrayed jin perfectly well done he is hard to do with out geting to carried away. i love jin and touya (as characters and pairing) thanks this fic was really cute
Neon Souffle chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
This made me so happy(not to mention I was practically cackling with glee when Jin killed Reisho)! I like how it was in Jin's point of veiw instead of third person, third person annoys me. Anyway, nicely done!
Eternally Deleted chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
All I can say is... SO FRECKIN CUTE!
Sora Sotara chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
(giggles) Love the story, it was WAY cute again even though the pairing feels odd to me. (shrugs) Oh well, go figure. It's still sweet and that massive use of power to save your loved one always gets me...

Keep it up dear!
Kaze27 chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
If I were to give you points on this fic, I'd give you a 9.99 out of ten. So close to perfect. I love Jin, and I hate Risho and Bakken...So to me, that was a pretty kick-ass fic. *Claps hands* I applaude you...Good job...
yllom21 chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Aww, adorable and extremely cute, I loved it! I love your writing style and I think you did a wonderful job! Your Jin was also very well written.
Tsunade-Padfoot-Chan chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
Aww, so cute!
yuffiegal chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
SO CUTE!

I Love it...:)!
DieHeartYYHFan44 chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
AW! HOW KAWAII WAS THAT! _ (hey, be happy, I don't uae that word a lot!) OMG! That is definately a good way for Jin and Touya to have paired up! And you know what the weirdest part about all this is? I don't even like that couple much, but I think I'm your new convert. LOL Ok, GREAT JOB! I plan on reading some of your other Jin and Touya fics! BYE BYE!

Keira
ForbddenFox chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
I LOVED THAT! It was so kute! _ I love Jin...he rocks!...o.o ...a so does Touya. Reisho so totaly does NOT rock _ I am throughly glad he died! ...owch ...o.o ...harsh...anyhoowatchamakallits...i love the fic! It's great!

Ja Ne!
Abandonded and Left chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
That was super dute and I think you managed to capture Jin's personality rather well. I [Insert word for clapping that I just can't spell right now for the life of me...] you for managing this and I hope to read other things from you as well.
bunny of death chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
That was long and really, really good! do u think u can do a sequel except with Chuu and Rinku? that would be totally great!
PainfulxRecovery chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
I LOVED IT! It was so hilarious I almost fell off my chair laughing, seriously. It was so kawaii. You should of made them kiss at the very end though, but still awesome!

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