Gotta say, I loved Lance's character. He was my favorite part of this whole story. I just about died laughing during the scene where Lance saw all the shaved heads in solidarity with him.

man i was so excited for Pietro's mental breakdown but i guess it aint coming

So, this isn't really a review and you're probably never going to see this or even care, but I wanted to post it anyway. I just noticed that this story was originally published on my fourth birthday and that just made me super happy cause that was a really shitty time in my life and (if I was a good reader) this story would have made me so happy :)

I don't know what to say ...

It has been my great pleasure to read this. I know it has been several years since this but I was wondering... Did you ever write that prequel? I love the idea and I would love to read it. It has been ages since I've actually left a review... But I have spent quite an amount of time with this fic. I would send quotes to my friends and would find myself literally laughing out loud. I have enjoyed this greatly. I know I am super behind on the times though hahaha. You did a lovely job. :)

Liked everything except Kitty and kurt its Lance and Kitty

good story!

OMIGOSH OMIGOSH! I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D I especially loved the Pietro parts :P Anyway, I didn't catch many spelling error's which is really good! :) Most fanfics these days are terrible and yours was quite enjoyable! You portrayed all the characters in the exact right way and I loved it!

Lance would totally, TOTALLY be the father figure! I loved all the past stuff you had and everything felt really thought out which I really love in a fanfiction. :) The only thing I didn't like was that Kurt got with Kitty but that's only because I ship Lance and Kitty. :P But I do really think Kurt would be with Kitty...Lance does need someone though.

You did Todd very, very, very well! I loved the past issues with his mom because they were different from Lance so you were creative! I loved how real this fanfiction felt. :) It was like I was actually watching a movie about them. I also liked the brain issues with the blocking thing and how you did the professor it was just-AAGH! :D AMAZING

Pietro, was by FAR the best you did(mostly because I love Pietro the best but still lol) He would totally hate the hole *emotion* thing and would try to avoid it at first but then realize he couldn't and it was just amazingly well writen! :) Plus I had ran out of Rogue and Pietro fanfics to read and then suddenly i'm reading this and "BAM!" :D I really loved how you didn't focus on the romance but it was still there like in every day life. And how he'd run and stuff and how he actually stood up to his father! And how he helped Wanda! :D I can't even put it into words on how much this fanfiction (mostly the Pietro parts but I loved all of it) Made me happy!

I loved all the other characters as well. I thought that maybe Scott wouldn't be so much of a jerk but it was still pretty fine :) I loved the entire bromance with Pietro and Evan and his family! I loved how Scott and Jean were together and that Jean didn't get with Pietro(I think it's personally a horrid shipping :P ) So I really loved that. I also liked how Kitty and Lance were still friends and she helped him work through things! Overall this was an amazing story which kept me from writing myself(My followers hate me :P ) and made me want to read the entire thing all at once! :) If you do, do a sequel I think it'd be like maybe after you left off. :) Pietro could be seriously debating about taking Rogue to prom, have a little drama between the students and then have Magneto come back and get totally spanked by Pietro and Wanda who totally team up and just beat the heck out of him before he crawls away. :) Also if you did write more, i'd like you to add school scenes! So there would be bulling, homework, classes, drama ect. ect. :) I also think (if you do write another one) that you should do a scene where Pietro is screaming his thoughts or something and the professor thinks its time to teach him how to quite them. Also maybe he screams in his head something like "Oh no I like Rogue!" and Jean hears :) But then again I just love to read Pietro getting put in awkward, horrible, funny situations

(This review was a lot longer than expected sorry. :P I just really had to tell you everything I thought about it. And this isn't even everything I thought! :) Thanks so much for writing this! )

One of the very best Brotherhood story I ever read. Lance, Pietro and Todd are so well written and the brotherly relationship between them is very touching. I love the look you give us in their psyche and how you have them interact with the others, especially Pietro and Beast. I can read this story again and again and again with as much enthusiasm as I read it the first time. Thanks!

that was one of the best stories i have ever read! i loved it!

I know it's been a long time since you post this fic but it was such a good fic that i felt I had to make a review.
Your plot was good, even with the mental/emotional stuff.

First time i saw a Rogue/pietro fic, still it was pretty good since you didn't focus on it. I think i found a new pairing in your fic that i could like if correctly written. Todd/Rahne, I know it's weird but in your fic they're kinda good together., even if you didn't have confirmed it i think you had implied it (at least that is how i read it so)

I doubt you will respond but just know you had done an awesome job and your epilogue was on of the best i read.

Aww, I didn't want it to end! Oh well. I liked this a lot; good job! Write more stuff like this and you'll be really popular in no time!

This was a really interesting well written story, I love the character development, and how Lance especially is finally able to move from 'dad' to 'friend'. The drama was sad (obviously lol) but it wasn't done badly. :) Partcularly loved the 'torture' of the boys during the shopping spree haha!

Great story I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Awesome story! -

I read this story a long time ago. Forgot to favorite it. Thought I favorite'd it. Found it again. Haha. I'm happy. :D

This is a great story. The plot is really original. Glad I found it again. :)