Reviews for A Moment in Time
Lu Bright chapter 7 . 5/29
I thought George died...?
Captain.Snarry91 chapter 20 . 4/13
Why would there be a raven on the statue? The Ravenclaw animal is an EAGLE. Say it with me everyone, an EAGLE!
brrcold chapter 20 . 3/1
Ok we know he wanted a family, but wouldn’t this whole situation be avoided if Harry had been placed with the weasleys after his parents were killed.
memo.malfoy chapter 19 . 2/25
Let me just say this: WOOOOOW
I realize that writing would never convy how much in awe I am of this story, but I am giving it a shot.
I read many fics where Harry is the Hier of several founders and sometimes all of them, sometimes it was fine and explained well and sometimes it just didn't make sense that it turned me off the story all together. This, however, this is pure ingenues. You just made it so easy to accept and believe and the time line was Perfect. I am for the first time reviewing a fic before I even go through all the chapters and I don't even know if it is complete.
Thank you for such a great story.
flower pot girl chapter 35 . 12/20/2019
What an amazing story.
I loved the way Harry and Draco rebuilt their relationship and became a family.
The whole arc of the tale, from finding Harry to the future scenes covered such an adventure that kept me rapt and possibly ignoring things I ought to be doing!
The flawed humanity of people, as nobody, as Harry acknowledges, is pure and recognising our faults and striving to do better is the best we can do.
Thank you for sharing this.
Nikki chapter 1 . 8/27/2019
After all of these years, and all the stories I have read, I still admire the story you wove. "A Moment in Time" is among my favorites! I hope that you are doing well and are weaving your own moments magically. Thanks for writing this tale!
leopardblack chapter 35 . 7/29/2019
Absolutely amazing. This was so beautiful. Thank you.
Parker64 chapter 20 . 6/20/2019
Aww he calls his teddy bunny, I actually call mine that
Guest chapter 9 . 4/12/2019
I am really glad that I can read your story, live with its characters. But I have one concern. I know that this story is old, but for me is new, for me is in the present. When you love somebody and find out this person is dead, you're more affected with them not living anymore at all, not only living with you. Draco reacted in the second way.
Lauren's Glee Stories chapter 25 . 12/12/2018
Remus and Sev, well, that’s a new one. I kind of thought it after I was obviously so wrong in earlier chapters. And I knew after Harry requested nicole what was happening, but I’m glad that he’ll be okay. I’m also glad that Lily and James told Harry he should forgive people. I think he knows he was being a bit harsh, like with the weasley’s on Halloween.
Lauren's Glee Stories chapter 21 . 12/12/2018
Well shit. He killed the Dursley’s. Huh. Also, I feel like Dumbledore truly does regret his actions. I mean, he also acted on the information that was in front of him, but where he failed astronomically was all the lies! I mean shit with Molly and Voldemort, and Lily and the Evans’ and the Dursley’s. He really fucked up there. And then with the trial! He of all people should have listened to that gut instinct and demanded all evidence and tests be taken. But alas, he overlooked too many things.
Lauren's Glee Stories chapter 20 . 12/12/2018
Okay; I kind of want to add my two cents worth. Of course I get why Harry is beyond furious, everybody close to him turned their back on him. But, I do try to see more than one side to a story. Ron and Hermione literally saw him kill Ginny. They saw their best friend murder Ginny. With their own eyes. There were no assumptions or guessing there, they saw that. Now, knowing the wizarding world, polyjuice at the very least should have been taken into consideration, but they literally had JUST seen that. The ministry, Dumbledore and the trial are what really failed Harry. It was their job to look for any evidence and let’s be real it was some concrete shit! There was no reason to doubt that he had killed her, and by extension Collin. Now, knowing what we learnt about all the death eater crap and Percy (piece of shit by the way), it’s obvious that it wasn’t him. I just feel like Harry would probably have benefited from taking a small step back to view it more logically.
Lauren's Glee Stories chapter 14 . 12/12/2018
Hello! I’ve been reading and loving this story so much! Literally I don’t now know how I found it but it has been a ROLLERCOASTER of emotions! That thing Sirius said made me think to a thought I had a few chapters back about him and Sev... I wonder who he was actually talking about. Anyway, I seriously love this story and if you werent a complete stranger I’d probably hug you for writing this so spectacularly.
Guest chapter 34 . 8/28/2018
Wait WHAT?! I as like yayy an update is coming and then i looked at the fucking last update...don't get me wrong though, I'm just annoyed because this is easily the best one I've ever read. Great plot. Great characterisation. I don't even like M-preg ones but you wrote it so well. UGHHH I'll just say they had a little girl and lived happily ever after and had amazing life's! thankyou for this
SevmyLuv chapter 7 . 8/24/2018
While this is a well written fic, it's just not to my preference. Honestly, I would have rather liked Harry going all ballistic and taking revenge, not still meek and obedient even after being wrongly accused. I prefer my favorite characters to have a backbone, which Harry lacks.
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