| Reviews for Five Girls, a Jedi, and a Supermarket |
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sinetrum chapter 1 . 10/23/2019 I know this is weird, sorry, but why I red them till end and laugh all the way there still confuse me. damn, this is so good and simple. love ya |
lunarchroniclesandcockatiels chapter 1 . 1/28/2016 LOL! |
Darthmii chapter 1 . 5/13/2009 I like it for sure but needs more story. Looking forward for next part. |
What chapter 1 . 6/30/2008 That was easily the dumbest... weirdest... *groans* |
jess chapter 1 . 7/16/2005 THIS IS SOO FUNNY I LOVE It |
Csillan.Rose chapter 1 . 7/9/2005 LoL! aww, poor Obi-Wan.. he's probably SO confused right now! _ Lol, that's great though! :D Very creative. |
xXThedoctorxX chapter 1 . 6/29/2005 REALLY FUNNY |
blitz chapter 1 . 10/5/2004 verry...difrent. but good i hope theres more MTFBWY |
jedi keliam kenobi chapter 1 . 6/26/2004 oh. that was so funny. i laughed so hard that my stomach hurts. genevieve and maria have great taste. lol(laugh out loud). sequel please(if there already isn't one). |
Not Amused chapter 1 . 8/22/2003 You know, if I read anymore self-insertion fics, I'll probably scream. Who am I kidding, I'm already screaming. Does characterization mean nothing to writers anymore? Not that I can call you one, of course (A writer). At least you manage to have a good grasp of spelling and basic grammar, which is always a blessing on FFN. As my mother always said, soften the harsh with a bit of sweetness. Word of advice, quit trying to put your crowd in with YOUR Obi, it's been hacked to death, and it's always boring no matter who does it. Watch the movies sometime and learn something. This has been a flame. :-D |
Moonprincess202 chapter 1 . 10/18/2002 This pretty funny! |
CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur chapter 1 . 7/16/2002 This is absolutely funny. Every time I read it, it still makes me laugh. You must finish this story. |
Spyre chapter 1 . 5/29/2002 This is hysterical. I adore this totally. Do a casual check for spelling errors, though, and it'll be both grammatically and comedically perfect. hehehe... Ya better friggin' add another chapter... or I'll... slice ya... with... um... Well... WITH MY OVER USAGE OF THE-THREE-DOTS! BWAGHAHAHAHA! eghem. as ever: e |
glass chapter 1 . 4/25/2002 This story is sooooo awesome! |
abababababa chapter 1 . 3/30/2002 hahahahahaha...i used to have a crush on obi-wan lol...wait a minute ::sees the Jedi vs. Sith poster in her room:: i still do! lol j/k...cute fic ;) |